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Pracsting The Punchlines

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Beating Merkz It's "Something To Achieve" The Text King? He's "Bluffing So We Belive"
This Win I'm "Buzzing To Receive" Rip Him Shirtless So Theres "Nothing Up His Sleeve"

Put The Hollow To My Chest, But He's The Man To Pull The Trigger With No Ammo"
The Highlite Of Ya Life Was " Walking In My Foot Step" Like This "Nigga Was My Shadow "

We've Seen This "Wanker Screwing Cocks" Style More Messy Then A "Painter Doing Shots"
This Kid Is Whack He's More "Up And Down" Then A Personal "Trainer Doing Squats"

It's Not Right, It's " Wrong He Spit " These Bars Are Sure To Be Testing This Man Good
Now It's Obvious To See He's Got Katan On His Dick Like He's "Questioning His Man Hood"
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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WACK!!!
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upping feed
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice punches man
i gotta work on mine
keep'em goin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Viral »

ur gettin better....im jst gonna have to disagree wit da use of nigga....ur from australia and ur white as hell.......otherwise it was straight i liked it
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, dude i only said that because the dude i dissed was black.
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