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A Beautiful Loser, A Beautiful Letdown

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A Beautiful Loser, A Beautiful Letdown

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Bet you think you're stealthy, huh? Yeah honey, you're so smart. You're so God damned brilliant, and the sun shines out of your ass. Here it comes, your little mind-fuck game...It's entertaining at best. "Tell you the truth, I prefer the worst of you. So fuck you." You're not who you think you are, but, I'll keep playing along, "Stage left, that's your cue!", and watch you preform. So lovely you are. Such a beautiful loser, a beautiful letdown...... Baby, you're a star.
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Post by Momeijah »

i Like The Metaphorical Approaches And The Whole Dancing Around The Subject Letting Readers Guess What ur Talking About. This One Can Be interpreted in Many Different Ways, im Guessing it's About The 'Beautiful Loser' Being So Good at... Being a Loser? Haha. This One Was a Little Unorthodox But Still Good, Keep it Up.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Like Dom said, can be interpreted in many different ways.

From lines like "I'll play along" I see this piece as if you're looking at someone for who they really are, but THEY don't know who they really are and they put on a mask everyday that you can see right through. Just my interpretation though, haha.
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Post by Arvincible »

Hmmm a lot of sarcasm here and I see that this is a personal thing eh? Im just guess ing because it seems to me, the way I perceive this piece is that ur letting out some anger.
Well yeah, almost everyone can relate to this, having someone around who you feel is acting stupid without awareness or without realization that you notice their stupid acts...
Real thought provoking though eh? Good job
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Thanks.
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