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Enjoy.

im Like illest Emcee Border Patrol, it's Time To Wreck-This-intruder's-Rhymes ..||
DOCTOR Dom, When They Think Of 'Jabs' it's Like im 'injected-into-Their-Mind' ..||
Who's Better? i Got Stardom Here, ur Unknown And im Far-From-a-Stranger ..||
Last Time Someone Said 'Check' in Our Battle, The 'King Was Far-From-in-Danger' ..||*
Set, Prepared, im The Threat, Beware, Calling u a Vet-is-Rare ..||
'What Happens in Vegas Stays in Vegas' Explains Why ur Daddy Left-u-There! ..||
it's Like u Got Survivor's Guilt, Finding it Hard Accepting-a-Killing ..||
For a Recount u Fought 'Tooth And Nail' With ur 'Fingers' Like u Were Checking-a-Filling! ..||**
Always Vicious, ill Attack in a Second, Letting Loose My Reckless-Words ..||
And i Ain't Talking Bout Skating When i Say He's Gnna 'Deck-The-Curb' ..||
Mopping The Floor With His Ass, Dude's a Stick Compared To My Whopping-Bars ..||
After i Land a Punch On His Jaw's The Only Time Rell's 'Droppin-Hard' ..||


*Chess.
**Filling at The Dentist.

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Post by Kurse »

Pretty sick for a quick reply.
Unless you're familar with some of the recent drops in the scripts, it's hard to tell who you're talkin about until the very end of the verse. (probably because you've had a good beef count with multiple illest members...haha)
But for being a quick reply and keepin it on a professional tip and leaving the "shit-talk" so to speak on the record (or text for this matter), it was a more mature approach to burning someone back. But overall a good drop. Not one of your classics...but good response none the less.

Your beginning bar and ending bar were probably ur best ones on here. But thats coo...always supposed to start strong and end strong! Good job pimpin!
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Post by Glamtrash »

I like it. I specifically like how it's a "guess who i'm shit talking" game. It certainly wasn't your best by any means. But for a quick reply shit was good.

**Mopping The Floor With His Ass, Dude's a Stick Compared To My Whopping-Bars ..||
After i Land a Punch On His Jaw's The Only Time Rell's 'Droppin-Hard' ..|

^^Best bit.
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Post by Viral »

ima agree wit kurse...for a quick reply this was good....

Set, Prepared, im The Threat, Beware, Calling u a Vet-is-Rare ..||
What Happens in Vegas Stays in Vegas' Explains Why ur Daddy Left-u-There! ..||


i thought that shit was pretty funny...

that deck da curb was reckless...HA!

Always Vicious, ill Attack in a Second, Letting Loose My Reckless-Words ..||
And i Ain't Talking Bout Skating When i Say He's Gnna 'Deck-The-Curb' ..||



the more beef...the more activity....thats always a guarantee..lol
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Post by complexity »

"Set, Prepared, im The Threat, Beware, Calling u a Vet-is-Rare ..||
'What Happens in Vegas Stays in Vegas' Explains Why ur Daddy Left-u-There! ..|| "

My favorite lines, BAR NONE

8/10.

Pretty good for a quick response and it's nice to see you writing again.
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Post by Omega Bill »

DAMN.

This shit was nice for a quick reply. Pumps me up to see people actually responding to eachother and getting shit poppin.

Good stuff for a quick reply, had some nice punches that landed

Who's Better? i Got Stardom Here, ur Unknown And im Far-From-a-Stranger ..||
Last Time Someone Said 'Check' in Our Battle, The 'King Was Far-From-in-Danger' ..||*
Set, Prepared, im The Threat, Beware, Calling u a Vet-is-Rare ..||
'What Happens in Vegas Stays in Vegas' Explains Why ur Daddy Left-u-There! ..||

Nice. Both yall looking hungry with these replies.
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Post by Arvincible »

way to show him what tits feel like.
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Post by Cee4 »

this was a solid drop.
good for a quick reply
flow and multis were on point
every punch was good but it was just lackin a couple of killer punches to finish it off. but thats understandable since u semi retired.
anyway overall decent i`d say it is a draw between u and rell so far
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Post by Momeijah »

Word. Btw This Was a Reply To Rell's 'Quick Key', And My Drop 'Giggity Giggity Ye' Was a Reply To Ruthless Retaliation, Just So u Know The Order Of Things.
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