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16 Micz shut your fucking mouth, boy.

Post by Omega Bill »

Cats want to fight, but they scared and punches turn to pushes
Step back put a few slugs in ys stomach like ya fell asleep in the bushes
This dude wishes he could get bitches, hell never respond its passed doubt
Cause this cats only 17 years old and hes just a pawn in bein assed out
So lashes out, and gets Smacked Down like an ass clown like a Friday on UPN
He says hes got the game on lock down, how come you wont diss me then?
You could never lift me, cause I been here 4 months and Im already gettin better
Rappin like you got a pair uh tits, this bitch could probably fit in his mas sweater
This kid smacks more balls than Roger Federer, dodge my throws ur on red alert
Cause will put holes in your bed n shirt, cat on his knees he seems to be used to dicks
Puttin on his little sisters lipstick, sacrifice this faggot, holes in wrist, slang him on a Crucifix
You couldnt keep up with this ever changing evolution if you wore your White Nikes
Id normally just kick your mouth and stop your noise pollution but I dont fight dykes
The whole site would like to see this guy leave maybe come back and start dude new
Until we found out he was jerkin his meat to Steve while he was watching Blues Clues
Break you in like some new shoes, Ill cut you down boy like your some instant grass
If you keep insist to last, then Ill just put another size 14 Jordan imprint in ya ass
You dont have no fucking cash, you talkin about producing like god is blessin ya beat
Imma expose ya cause you stressin to meet, the CEO of CBS to get ya song on Sesame Street
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Post by Haz »

Cats want to fight, but they scared and punches turn to pushes
Step back put a few slugs in ys stomach like ya fell asleep in the bushes
This dude wishes he could get bitches, hell never respond its passed doubt
Cause this cats only 17 years old and hes just a pawn in bein assed out
So lashes out, and gets Smacked Down like an ass clown like a Friday on UPN
He says hes got the game on lock down, how come you wont diss me then?
You could never lift me,

^^^ HAHAHA... LMAO@ Da Few slugz punch .. Shit Had Me Laughin

The Middle Wus Decent.. But How u Ended it Had Me Rollin Lmfao..

Overrall This Diss Wus Good Bill.. its Good To See U Usin Humor
You Had some Funny Punches that Always Good..

STEVE URCLE MOTHA FUCKAH LMAO LMAO LMAO!!!
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

..This Drop Was Decent ..
When You Diss Somebody Like Micz You Gotta Come ill On Tha Punches ..
Juss Study Everythin I Told You Last Night ..
And Start Chewin Dudes Heads Off ..(No Homo) ..
Lmao ...Props
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Kurse »

Personally Micz has his cool moments and his not-so-cool moments...
guess it depends on what kinda day you catch him on. Overall he's an aiight nigga, know what i mean!?

But for a written...it was a nice drop. Not ur hottest...your topical scripts are ur dopests ones. But it was solid and more importantly humorous. In a diss...punchlines are dope...but humor is half the battle. No matter what level ur at...it's a popularity contest.

So far you've thrown the first couple of punches...but by the sounds of him you might not get a response. But I could be wrong. Only time will tell. Props on the drop Bill.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Thanks for all the feed and advice.
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Post by Glamtrash »

it was a nice drop. Not ur hottest...your topical scripts are ur dopests ones.
Co signed.


This was some funny shit. It's good to be versatile with your work. Keep dropin.
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Post by Dead Silence »

that was some good shit 2 bad it wont be answered :-(
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Post by JayGunna »

nice ish fammo...
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Post by Arvincible »

bill ur a fag, ill kill you and ur bitch ass punches.

anyways you got my feed on aim already so fuck you
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