Some real nice shit

[- Mutual -]

Verse 1:
i take ya back to christ as a sacrifice
i be taken life stabbed in the side
ya so wide i couldnt miss wit da 40 cal even if you hide
you better decide this life or comic crimes
comin at chronic times monophonic rhymes
spitin dat common lines drop em on em minds
civil right turned to a hidden fight
dismissin fright to ya bitch kissin guys
elevated lies comin wit fumagated sigh of carbon dioxide
now ya'll get a historectemy fo disrespectin me
and not selectin me as a connected G
now where ya B runnin dese rejected beats
ya want da full effect of me hand this tech to me
and re-electin streets and suspectin heat interlectually
in da pocket wait load it and pop it clean it and drop it
catchin a locket wit a picture so tell em to stop it
man ya deterior i'm superior you've got to die like bacteria
becaus ya wearier and now i'm inferior
i be on da scene in a benz racin down ya strip
will diss rap never end well i'll tell ya diss grip
dont like me den flip i got da last clip stickin it in so i clique
dont make me get physical like physicicians
goin real wierd breakin mic traditions
goin invisible like magicians
wait ya scared so quiver and quake
make sure ya'll shiver and shake
and then when you slither awake
i'll make sure you whither away
why forgiver her today
this mafucka need to be slain
takin out of his brain to intense pain
now dye away in shame never rise to fame
ya's lines is lame why persist to rhymes the same

hook:

Verse 2:
ya sat on da throne but got no land to own
so ya cant sit down given da crown just throw it around
cause ya maybe a king but ya dont rule a thing
he dont want diamonds cause he dont like da bling
waitin fo another win but errbody houndin em
trappin em in and surroundin em tryna be poundin em
like a pendulem ya rendered dum stupid scum to lazy to run
tryna pull up a gun but they got da knife in for fun
now it's a mistake he wont give up a rib to break
he maybe fake but he got da cake cash to pay out his way
he has been lead way a stray dumpin his body of in this lake
fo anothers fishermans sake dont find da body or die today
we got a mack loaded wit a gat probin round da room likeits global
actin noble tryna rap it's over man ya trapped no alchohol ya sober
no shoulder to cry over
ha ha unleash this demon in me rappin over beats tryna save da streets
man i am unleashed decrese da peace leave em in pieces
as da hate decreases tryna rap and teachers like a hip hop teacher
a christ preacher to slice meet her we must defeat her
so do ya really have da rep of a villain
for weapon conceilin this fact is way to appealin
when ya feelin this shit from da heart
rappin bout raps now where do we start

man i think this is my best shit wot do ya think
anyone got an idea for a hook all the rhymes i keep thinkin are shit
any help
any way uppin feed thnx

[Viral]

Verse 1:
i take ya back to christ as a sacrifice
i be taken life stabbed in the side
ya so wide i couldnt miss wit da 40 cal even if you hide
you better decide this life or comic crimes
comin at chronic times monophonic rhymes
spitin dat common lines drop em on em minds
civil right turned to a hidden fight
dismissin fright to ya bitch kissin guys
elevated lies comin wit fumagated sigh of carbon dioxide
now ya'll get a historectemy fo disrespectin me
and not selectin me as a connected G
now where ya B runnin dese rejected beats
ya want da full effect of me hand this tech to me
and re-electin streets and suspectin heat interlectually
in da pocket wait load it and pop it clean it and drop it
catchin a locket wit a picture so tell em to stop it
man ya deterior i'm superior you've got to die like bacteria
becaus ya wearier and now i'm inferior
i be on da scene in a benz racin down ya strip
will diss rap never end well i'll tell ya diss grip
dont like me den flip i got da last clip stickin it in so i clique
dont make me get physical like physicicians
goin real wierd breakin mic traditions
goin invisible like magicians
wait ya scared so quiver and quake
make sure ya'll shiver and shake
and then when you slither awake
i'll make sure you whither away
why forgiver her today
this mafucka need to be slain
takin out of his brain to intense pain
now dye away in shame never rise to fame
ya's lines is lame why persist to rhymes the same

hook:

Verse 2:
ya sat on da throne but got no land to own
so ya cant sit down given da crown just throw it around
cause ya maybe a king but ya dont rule a thing
he dont want diamonds cause he dont like da bling
waitin fo another win but errbody houndin em
trappin em in and surroundin em tryna be poundin em
like a pendulem ya rendered dum stupid scum to lazy to run
tryna pull up a gun but they got da knife in for fun
now it's a mistake he wont give up a rib to break
he maybe fake but he got da cake cash to pay out his way
he has been lead way a stray dumpin his body of in this lake
fo anothers fishermans sake dont find da body or die today
we got a mack loaded wit a gat probin round da room likeits global
actin noble tryna rap it's over man ya trapped no alchohol ya sober
no shoulder to cry over
ha ha unleash this demon in me rappin over beats tryna save da streets
man i am unleashed decrese da peace leave em in pieces
as da hate decreases tryna rap and teachers like a hip hop teacher
a christ preacher to slice meet her we must defeat her
so do ya really have da rep of a villain
for weapon conceilin this fact is way to appealin
when ya feelin this shit from da heart
rappin bout raps now where do we start

man i think this is my best shit wot do ya think
anyone got an idea for a hook all the rhymes i keep thinkin are shit
any help
any way uppin feed thnx

dope eminem line

otherwise..i thought it was pretty straight...lol

annnd if not im jst curious as to why its on here...

[- Mutual -]

my friend Jake aka Chronic wrote da first verse i added some
and nice song man i got da whole album now

[Viral]

lol...i seee

[Cee4]

GODD are you that Crazy Mike guy on topix coz i think he got caught biting did he not.
anyway the verse is nice whoever wrote it
kinda funny coz most of your shit is basic then u pull some nice lines out
i dunno lol

[Haz]

ya'll get a historectemy fo disrespectin me


^^^^ From " Open Mic".

WHOOOO Da FUCK PASSD U DA MIC?!?!?

[Cee4]

Quick its another biter
Lets get Alpha Bill to run him off the site

[Dead Silence]

hahaha

CHAARRRRGE!

[Viral]

ya'll get a historectemy fo disrespectin me


^^^^ From " Open Mic".

WHOOOO Da FUCK PASSD U DA MIC?!?!?

yeah i got the sound clip up on my post of it

[Haz]

LMFAO OOO SHIT...Dats Why its a Sticky
Yeah.. Dat Wusnt a Kool Line 2 Steal LMFAO 2 Obvious

[- Mutual -]

alright i get it
i get it
i spent weeks on that and all i get i critisism fo 1 dam line
alright calm down
and no i'm not crazy Mike from Topix?

[Cee4]

http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-ho ... 2B1G42/p78


GODD check the bottom of the page. That crazy Mike guy has stole your verse lol
and it says hes from the same place as you
where the fuck it Matlock lol
i sniff them out like Scooby Doo

[- Mutual -]

i checked it out
apparently he comes to this website claims he knows me
motherfucka does it again i'll sort'im out
how did you come across topix though
and it's doin better than us fuckin website got 102 thousand posts yesterday
alone 29 million in total
thats in hip hop section
Matlock is in England
I live in Wales

[Cee4]

i started on there for a month before i found this site.
i go back and check it out every so often.
that site sucks balls big time lol

[- Mutual -]

he must know me or sumin
but who da fucks he
must be one of my friends i told i went to this site