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Forget Fallin

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You'll Remember This Face Like im Who Police r Sketchin For a Death
Like My Muscles r Tightend Due 2 Failin im Here Stretchin For Success
im Shootin For the Stars I Culd Be Starrin Wishin For Help But
As i Fall im Just Like Batman With his Car " Pickin My Self Up"
The Odd'z Suck i Wont Let Um Bring Me Down Im God Struck
Never "Runnin Out of Lines" Like i Have All My Prod Ducs
I Can Do This Cause My Bars "Bad 2 The bone" like Lupis
On a Stage Infront Of Crowds i've Seen Men Fall Well
when they Cheer for me it "Relieves Pain" Like Menthol Gell
For The People That Hate Cus Envy i Wish Them All Hell
Some Care.2.Say in there Minds lines Dunt Flair fa Days
u'll still see me "Stand..in" 4ever like a Hurricanes here 2 Stay
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Post by Spartan »

nice shit man
The Odd'z Suck i Wont Let Um Bring Me Down Im God Struck
Never "Runnin Out of Lines" Like i Have All My Prod Ducs
my fave bit
i'll be on a collab wit GODD sometime within two days hope ya feed
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Post by Haz »

Nah No Doubt i'll Give u fEed As Soon As you Drop it
Thanks Alot Homie.. yo Once u Post 100 Times u Can Vote
Didnt Mean 2 Come Off As a Asshole Dats jus How shit Works
& If U Can Next Time sorta Break Down The feed .. you'll See i'll Do it for u..


UPPIN FOR FEEED ILLEST!
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|.R.SON.aLL.|
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

I Liked Tha First Few Bars ..
Kinda Fell Off in Tha End Tho ..
You Kept Tha Multies Up ..and Everythin Else ..
It Was Pretty Koo ..
Juss End it Harder ..
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice shit
came pretty strong but got weaker
yes ya did keep multies alive tho
overall i liked it
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Glamtrash »

Nice shit dude. It would have been better if you could have held the strength of it the whole way through as you did lose it at the end. But all in all it's a pretty decent drop. Worth the read.

im Shootin For the Stars I Culd Be Starrin Wishin For Help But
As i Fall im Just Like Batman With his Car " Pickin My Self Up"
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