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Scip
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Droppin This Quick Free, It's Nothing, Like Coppin Some Pfft B

Toppin The Kid, Me? Nah, Won't Happen, Like Gay Dudes Stoppin For Titties

Pop In, And Spit See, Blaze The Tool, That'll Enslave This Fool, Even Graze His Crew

This Faggot Shine, Only if We Talkin Fruit In The Sun Then You Raise In/Raisin Dude

Explain To Who, See Im As Fresh As They Come, Call Me Dad, The Rest Of You Sons

Kid Actin Hard, I aint Stressin You Son, Just Poke Your Chest In And Dump

See I'm Blessed With The Gun, The Lead Spits Hot, Ya Dead Bitch, Drop

Everyones Laughin Cuz You Joke But You Just Fled, Ditched, Hopped


Quick And Shit

I just wanna battle
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

...Pretty Koo Drop Fam ..
Tha Multies Were Better Than Tha Punches Tho ..
Not a Good Look ..
Tha Raise in Wordplay Juss a Lil Forced ..
But Everythin Else Was Koo For a Quick Key ..
Keep Postin ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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decent first verse welcome to the scriptures!, after my battle with jay gunner how about a four bar text battle?, as for this multis were on point, flow seemed a little streched, work on the punchlines too
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by Scip »

good looks

yea it was quick i was tryin to battle haha

and seq yea its good ill set em all up and drop in all of em
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