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Presenter:Attention all of RapWars! Thank you all for coming out today to witness the rising star who goes under the alias of !$Chicago$!. This man was born in January 1989 in Chicago, IL, currently by way of Carbondale, IL. He's big, black, and his hobbies are Rap & Hip-Hop music, hitting people who wear glasses, and pulling YOUR bitch. He'll ask you to please die even though the subject might be offtopic. That's just the kind of guy he is. He enjoys Little Wayne, although his style doesn't reflect. Thus far in his life, he's fucked Lauren London, Rihanna, Christina Milian, & even the fucking MILF Lisa Raye. So without further adoo,...
!$Chicago$!:Shut the fuck up Gary Coleman and gimme da mic,...
*Punches Gary Coleman*
The best cause my text grand never divertin but stick 2 the fuckin plan//
Cuz last time I was 'beat' yo girlfriend had my dick in her fuckin hand!!//(Ooo shit!)
I'm rippin' the man while niggaz 'hold me down' like strait jackets and shit//
strait rachets and clips that 'eat a nigga flesh' like gay maggots and shit!!//(No homo)
So we dip in the whip and give 'weak' niggaz a seven day warning...//
Den bring enuff 'heat' before 'breakfast' 2 leave Alonzo ass Morning!!//(whattup?!)
While im joining forces wit myself Im prepared so I lace up the Nike Airs...//
As I lick 2 in the nite airs im never 'lazyie' to give a bitch nigga Nitemares!!//(DaM!)
I fight rare deliver quick but I only need to bang with one fist...//
& yall 'suckin lil dicks' put a nu meanin 2 da phrase tight lipped!!//
Im nice kid cause my lyrics stay 'erect' and I ain't started yet//
I'm the pesty 'dog at ya neck' cuz I told yall; . . .FUCK VETS!!//( )
So lets discuss da experience unda my belt 2 leave yo bars unda seige//
I geuss I'mma be the 'man like afghanistan' the way y'all bitches under me!!//(Hell yea, . . .)
This may be my coming out party and when I say that its no homo...//
Cause wen I step out I 'slice face time' like im cuttin a fuckin promo!!//
So its a no go when niggaz come thru and say !$Chicago$! booty//
Cuz ill 'do it again' like 'Scary Movie' & prove yall all wrong Doofy!!//(Officer Doofy, reporting!)
The lines juicy moving and 'phat with flavor' like I gave Deelishis the D//
Mama taught me to 'clean my fuckin' plate' so im the one to end beef!!//(Eaarly!)
this was pretty decent dude good first scrip had some funny punchlines and wordplay was on point aswell it's good to see you around old rap wars days smh lol, my fav couple of bars were deff one and two see you around the fourm
This was Pretty Tough Niggah.
You The Best Nigga On This Site From Chicago No Doubt
So we dip in the whip and give 'weak' niggaz a seven day warning...//
Den bring enuff 'heat' before 'breakfast' 2 leave Alonzo ass Morning!!//(whattup?!)
While im joining forces wit myself Im prepared so I lace up the Nike Airs...//
As I lick 2 in the nite airs im never 'lazyie' to give a bitch nigga Nitemares!!//(DaM!)
I fight rare deliver quick but I only need to bang with one fist...//
& yall 'suckin lil dicks' put a nu meanin 2 da phrase tight lipped!!//
Im nice kid cause my lyrics stay 'erect' and I ain't started yet//
I'm the pesty 'dog at ya neck' cuz I told yall; . . .FUCK VETS!!//( )
So lets discuss da experience unda my belt 2 leave yo bars unda seige//
I geuss I'mma be the 'man like afghanistan' the way y'all bitches under me!!//
^^ I Liked Dat Clip Of ya Verse Son..
Punches Wus Koo.. Multis Wus Strait.. Flow Wus Good.. Humor Wus Dere..
thanks thanks for the feed. And yea Complex I hear u, but the vet line was a play on vets as in people whos part of the site for a long time, and also veternarians when i said imma dog at ya neck
i liked ya mutlies and punches
hd me laughin pretty good overall
this is da first piece i've read from you
and its a good impression man keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
...This Shit Was aiight ..
Multies Was Tha Best Part Tho ..
Hella Played Punches ..
Played Wordplay ..
Everythin Was Pretty Much Played ..
Tha Flow Was Good Tho ..
Ya Creativity is Mad Lackin ..
I Read all This Shit Back in `04 or `05 ..
Show Me Sumptin New ..
-.RELL.FiaSCO.- wrote:...This Shit Was aiight ..
Multies Was Tha Best Part Tho ..
Hella Played Punches ..
Played Wordplay ..
Everythin Was Pretty Much Played ..
Tha Flow Was Good Tho ..
Ya Creativity is Mad Lackin ..
I Read all This Shit Back in `04 or `05 ..
Show Me Sumptin New ..
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