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hey precise here.. I excel-at-hate, get pissed n my pulse accelerates at steller-rates
ill knock on your door makin the cellar-shake, watchin it collapse while i cellebrate

i come fully armed with m-16's n bad-manners.. leavin enemies in round-craters
so really i dont gotta "jack-hammers"... to be crowned as a "ground-breaker"

i love to watch opponents stumble-n-drop then crumble-n-rot
YELLIN, i never mumble-or-talk, n always droppin heat like i fumbled-a-gloch

u dont want me to toss this pen-aside, cause when this menace-rides men'll-die
its genocide makin the senates fry, im straight demonic cause the devils a frend-of-mine

im obsessed with domination its my insatiable-love
only god himself really knows what im capable-of
ill strangle-a-dove, hangin it up n eatin dinner while it dangles-above
leave your countries president layin mangled-in-blood beside the table-with-slugs
yellin at em for stainin-the-rug

no ones safe from my conquest.. thats what ill show-the-priest while kickin his overies n stealin his roserie// douse irish crops TOTALY with more gas than a V8 motor-needs, while they try n draw luck from a clover-leaf// afterwards confess it all in court openly, then choke the notery grab my coat-n-leave//





i havent dropped a writtin in friggin forever, so heres somethin



*edit* link --> http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/HQ-li ... -balls.php

here ya go HQ =) ^^^^^
Last edited by precise on Mon May 26, 2008 12:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice shit i liked it alot

i love to watch opponents stumble-n-drop then crumble-n-rot
YELLIN, i never mumble-or-talk, n always droppin heat like i fumbled-a-gloch

u dont want me to toss this pen-aside, cause when this menace-rides men'll-die
its genocide makin the senates fry, im straight demonic cause the devils a frend-of-mine

My fave Bit i loved the multies set out nicely and nice flow man i liked it keep'em comin

check me out give feed thanks oh and HQ no need to bite my head off and where's his feed

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/in-a- ... t9151.html
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

get a link u noob
jk jk ...no seriously get a link lol
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Post by Viral »

damn talk bout a long time seein u on here again...lol...good shit man...dat was dat typical precise spit..didnt expect any less from ya...good drop man...u should stay more active mayyyne!
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Post by complexity »

"hey precise here.. I excel-at-hate, get pissed n my pulse accelerates at steller-rates
ill knock on your door makin the cellar-shake, watchin it collapse while i cellebrate "

That line and the devil one were the best.

It's to see you back man, this is your first drop in like 2 fucking years. Me, you, and a few other dudes use to be the only ones who dropped!
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Post by Omega Bill »

[font=Comic Sans MS]This was piece was real nice, man.

u dont want me to toss this pen-aside, cause when this menace-rides men'll-die
its genocide makin the senates fry, im straight demonic cause the devils a frend-of-mine

One of my favorite lines.

All the multis were executed nicely, and the vocabulary was executed nicely. Multis were the shining point in this piece, and the flow.

Good to see you droppin, man. When I got here you were one of the top and I liked reading your verses.

Keep droppin, man.[/font]
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Post by Kurse »

Long-ass time since u dropped nigga...we were startin to think that you were M.I.A. over here. But it's good to see that you still haven't lost ur fire...that was a clean verse if you ask me. Precise rusty they ask!?....Neverrrrrrrr! Nice shit pimpin!

When are u gonna take a vacation and come party it up out here in the Chi wit me and V?
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Post by precise »

thanks for all the positive feed! lol its appreciated, n Kurse i was tellin viral, probably this summer dude, me n a couple people were gonna take a road trip after i turn 21, definately gonna hit up chicago itd be sick
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Post by MesaR »

lol it's been a while dude, the drop was pretty funny multis were clean like expected, seen some hotter keys throughout the years though, STAY ACTIVE
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Post by Cee4 »

i liked this although i`ve seen a lot better from you in the cyphers. the whole thing was good but nothing really stood out to me except the devil bar . U had nice mulites and flow

u dont want me to toss this pen-aside, cause when this menace-rides men'll-die
its genocide makin the senates fry, im straight demonic cause the devils a frend-of-mine
^^^^
loved it. definitly your best bar of the verse
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Post by Subsist »

Last bar was sick. Its good to see precise back in business.
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Post by precise »

thanks dude, the last little splooge was my favorite im glad to see someone else liked it
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Post by Glamtrash »

haha nice job Donnie, stick around this time huh? And the last line rocked it.
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