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Ballad Of A Samurai

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After I Vanquish Foes Now The Mental Picture I Painted Grows/
When I Anger Explodes I Just Let My Fist 2 Fist Language Show/
I Make Body's Drop With Karate Chops And Round House Kicks/
Droppin Opposer Who Boast Up Dis Is One Soldier u Cant Out Wit/
Immaculate Speed You Wonder Who Hit You With The JuJitSu/
The Blind Samurai Who's Cry Rattle Down To The Battle Ground/
Written Religion A Sword Decision Of My Word Shattaz Clowns/
I Leap,Why Speak?I'm Always Ready For Action Steady Smashin'
Bashin Fools Who Claim They Clashin,
But Run Like Weak Girls When The Light From My Sword Flashes,
My Ballad Consist Of Merciless Verbals And Murderous Circles,
Don't Have To Worry I Slashed My Adversary Into The Cemetary
You Don't Know What Ya In Fa?
U Just Anotha Ninja Dey Have To Bury/
Come Into Action Like A Rotten Zero Who's A Forgotten Hero,
I Stop And See Smoke..They're Burnin Down My Masters Dojo,
Walkin Around Da Town I Catch Them Bastards Solo,
I Say A Prayer For The Dead So That I Stay Above Soil,
I Am Dark In My Heart Really Harsh..Ya See My Bloods Oil,
Coiling Up For Last Effort Attack, I Relinquish The Demons,
And Gave Out My Final Roar...
I Leaped Forward With My Sword And His Spinals Tore...
Direct Hit,How Can You Neglect This You Better Respect It,
I've Been Tested But All Have Been Defeated..Im 2 Wreckless,
Terrifying Thrust...My Blows Are Like Lightening Strikes
You Somethin Nice? Haha..You Struggle Frightening Mice,
Dude Had An Arsenal His Weapons Were Drawn With His Men,
I Duck And Thrust Past'em Now All Of Dem Gone With Tha Wind,
Attackin Leavin Dreams Scatter And Fiends Battered,
Livin For The Righteousness For Tha Blade Is What Made Him Valid..
I Experienced With My Owns Eyes Thats Why Its An Amazin Ballad..
Part 2 I Start To Follow Through For My Fallen Brothers To Avenge Them,
Fellow Friend Slain By The Pain Of A Samurai Without Their Own Redemption,
Resentment As An Infant,The Annonymous Champion Can I Get An Entrance,
Suspense... Everybody's A Suspect When I Walk Through,
Who Shall I Rush Next..My Sword Drawn To Everybody I Talk To..
Relentless Senseless Blood Shed Caused By A Massacre,
Capturing And Rapturing Those Who Are After Ya,
Weapons Drawn And Seconds Shown,Expose To Mercy,
Arreviderci No Fighting Fair I Declare Yall Brawl Dirty,
Early In The Morn I Best Be Tracing My Ancestry,Dark Spirits Help Me,
My Diet Consist Of Blood And Gore But Im Still Healthy.....
Real Wealthy On Skills ...When It Comes To This Samurai Shit..I Know How It Feels

P.s: I Was Not Tryna Get Super Lyrical..My Aspect Was To Tell A Story...
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aiight some good lines i didnt like this piece that much but i'm not sayin it's bad
keep'em comin this is 6/10

Bashin Fools Who Claim They Clashin,
But Run Like Weak Girls When The Light From My Sword Flashes,
My Ballad Consist Of Merciless Verbals And Murderous Circles,
Don't Have To Worry I Slashed My Adversary Into The Cemetary
You Don't Know What Ya In Fa?
U Just Anotha Ninja Dey Have To Bury/

My fave Bit ^
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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