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This shit is Bananas ft. Viral

Post by complexity »

Cypher mode, don't call it a come back.

(02:52:39) metaphoric flow: Dude rhyme something with Bananas because that's what this drop is.
(02:53:42) D1s3AsEdV1ruS: i eat bananas n beat annas?
(02:53:46) D1s3AsEdV1ruS: beat ya annas?
(02:53:46) D1s3AsEdV1ruS: lol
(02:53:57) metaphoric flow: Rhyme something with oranges
(02:54:27) D1s3AsEdV1ruS: i like to squeeze oranges n order super laurges?
(02:54:27) D1s3AsEdV1ruS: lol
(02:54:46) metaphoric flow: Guess who is back? Viral and his fruity rhymes, check it!
(02:54:53) D1s3AsEdV1ruS: lol ur fuckin stupid
(02:54:54) D1s3AsEdV1ruS: hahaha

The C-Man

We are born again, it was a complex-conception, the resurrection
of the best-connection, less-reflection
more-perfection, we're iller than a whores-infection
it's time you reward-the-veterans, who stay sharper than a sword-collection
we gave the board-suggestions, I'm bored-of-questions
like a sinner you ignored-the-blessings
your town-is-junk, you're from the boarded-section
hanging around-with-drunks, I can't count-the-months
you been down-with-punks, Viral records-the-best-in-here
you can't hope to afford-a-session-queer
we're a force-to-reckon-with, "feel-the-force" from the realist-source
steal-the-horse from king arthor, appeal-the-courts
see, it's nothing for me to get my points-across
i'm fucked enough to smoke joints-with-cops
for this joint-to-flop, you need the rest of my joints-to-pop
fuck a disappointing-drop, when I return-to-the-picture
I turn-into-hilter, you'll can go to hell, cuz we are burning-the-scriptures
you're a flash-in-the-pan, I flow-your-style
without the cracks-in-the-dam, cuz I know-my-child
like the back-of-my-hand, hold-the-dial
I'm back-with-a-plan, and a cold-ass-smile


The V-MAN


i slap liars n ride rims wit no tires, im hot wired, i did it all wit slim pliars/
i spin fires, catch a tide, cant go higher, plex got da city on lock like sid meiers//
virals spittin writtens like no way r u shittin me?/
jst so happen to be rappin while bein asked..do u fit in these?//
truth is im too big for most spaces, kids get mad at my skills cuz dey JUST racist/
most should JUST face it, i dont need to be dark,poppin pills butt hurt cuz dey JUST basic//
take 10 paces, turn around n jump, i break mens faces, fuck da crown, im crunk!/
his head races, burn the ground wit skunks, odor emergin statin, ur town is junk!//
known to amputate limbs damn he stays trimmed,really dont boast but man i stay grim!/
truth is, u hate him, i dont stop wit the whimsical whim! got u messin up like hey is dat tim?//
dont debate me, im jst so racy, my mind skips too much,always end up at macys/
might degrade me, but my spine is hasty, i slither so much dey should call me snakey!//
im not the type to beef, i rather just eat it, so if u got a problem find a couch n jst beat it/
i like to write wit teeth, dont make me repeat it, ull have nothin but gums left on ur knees gettin treated//
this is a rare occasion, suck it up like a hatian, take it to da head, fuck a duck like ur asian/
lyrical invasion,ill fuck up ur stations, now da hospitals mad cuz its losin all its patients!!//


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Post by Kurse »

Hahahahahaha....BANANASSSSSSSSSSS

I like that shit

Also nice to see Plex pair up with someone different outta nowhere. Not used to the whole C-Man/V-Man thing. But it worked nicely...just like the multi-play in this verse.

It made my PUBLIC hair happy Plex. haha
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice shit but obviously from plex thats pretty good anyway

more-perfection, we're iller than a whores-infection
it's time you reward-the-veterans, who stay sharper than a sword-collection
we gave the board-suggestions, I'm bored-of-questions
like a sinner you ignored-the-blessings

Nice Multies ^

Viral ya good at audio's and this shit is nice man nice flow

virals spittin writtens like no way r u shittin me?/
jst so happen to be rappin while bein asked..do u fit in these?//
truth is im too big for most spaces, kids get mad at my skills cuz dey JUST racist/
most should JUST face it, i dont need to be dark,poppin pills butt hurt cuz dey JUST basic//

My fave bit ^
I liked this Piece Over all 9/10
Keep'em comin anyway
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Viral »

ne thing wit my name on it doesnt get feed...lol its hilarious
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Post by precise »

lmao same here, i think thats why i stopped droppin writtens in the first place

anyway good shit, multies were sick n the flow was damn nice, i actually read the whole thing haha
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thanks for da feed yall..much appreciated
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Post by MagicMark »

eh not feeling this as much as others.. no hate n' what not

c man... lines where cool, but content lacking a lil for my style yano. multis where okay, but some seemed forced, or just thrown in to have multis yano, also use of - tion - rhyming wasnt used very effectively.. flow cool though and internals when used where used effectively between lines

viral - same kind of problem.. flow was hot no doubt, some places seemed a little simple "your town junk" "fuck a duck like your asian" lol.. some points seemed a little off or pointless, content again was jumpy, no real "oh shit" type lines.. but solid enough

keep it up...
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Post by complexity »

MagicMark wrote:eh not feeling this as much as others.. no hate n' what not

c man... lines where cool, but content lacking a lil for my style yano. multis where okay, but some seemed forced, or just thrown in to have multis yano, also use of - tion - rhyming wasnt used very effectively.. flow cool though and internals when used where used effectively between lines

viral - same kind of problem.. flow was hot no doubt, some places seemed a little simple "your town junk" "fuck a duck like your asian" lol.. some points seemed a little off or pointless, content again was jumpy, no real "oh shit" type lines.. but solid enough

keep it up...
I appreciate the feed and it is very true.

You have to take into mind that this was a cypher flow, that was suppose to be bananas. Nothing serious, no topic content.

When you freestyle with friends, if you do, I very likely doubt you cypher about politics. You're just going for some nice rhyming and a little shocking.

I still appreciate the feed though because you never want to drop something that comes off as not good.
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Post by Cee4 »

Good for a cypher. Both verses were basically just bunch of multis. Plex obviously since it was a cypher your verse didnt have the same thought behind it but you still had some dope bars.

you can't hope to afford-a-session-queer
we're a force-to-reckon-with, "feel-the-force" from the realist-source
steal-the-horse from king arthor, appeal-the-courts
see, it's nothing for me to get my points-across
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nice


Viral your verse was crazy lol. it flowed well but it kinda came off as a half decent impression of old eminem. i know its a cypher but some of it made absolutley no sense to me lol
that said you had some nice bars. i like your opener

i slap liars n ride rims wit no tires, im hot wired, i did it all wit slim pliars/
i spin fires, catch a tide, cant go higher, plex got da city on lock like sid meiers//
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Post by Haz »

Kool Cypher Yall...
i Liked Plexes Flow Betta.. & Virals Way Of Approachin The Cyph Betta...
All Around Yall Executed Multis Nice... Seen a Few Hitting Lines...

7/10...

Keep Droppin .
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thanks for da feed everyone....uppin
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