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skeptical serendipitious genes in do we believe
can we achieve in wot we see the truth decieves
rappin bout shit to get proof,naiive
we dont open are eyes to be defied
laws like its 1901 errbody gainst a black guy
man i hope Obama wins clinton should be sin
president i'ma give you a hint (bullshit)
hidden message a inprint next thing ya know Obama go missin
KKK actin all innocent where are the precidents
is anger in perpetual motion my notion
to a skeptical commotion is bomb Iraq leave'em all roastin
World War 3 is wot we approachin
the two towers went down now we no longer coastin
rollin thru life it slowed us the fuck down right to the present
shit aint pleasent but it's life are we ressurectin
war against suspectin countries rejectin
american laws we just sit back and applause
shit that we cause in our life our fault
we wont reach the stars
we'll all be gone nuclear fuckin bombs
ya know one gone "accidentilly" fall off
there will be some that just crawl-off
presidents,prime ministers they'll all just hold-off
who the fuck do you think you've got control of
fuck all ya involved on matters thats nothin to do with'em
Germany Vs Britain,America it had nothin to do with'em
but i gotta say if america hadnt have joined in
we'd be speakin german and this rap be spoilin
this site there's a message for which you to toil in

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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Nice Drop Tha Multi's Was On Point And The Vocab Was Pretty Descent..Just Try To Make Ya Bars Longer... Make'em A LiL Longer To Me That Would Fit Flow Better Wise.. Overall This Was A Thorough Drop.

is anger in perpetual motion my notion
to a skeptical commotion is bomb Iraq leave'em all roastin
World War 3 is wot we approachin
the two towers went down now we no longer coastin

^^ Hot Ass Line Bro... LoL I Hope You Ain A CONSPIRACY THEORIST LoL J/p.. Nice Drop...
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aiight thanks duc3
CONSPIRACY THEORIST no way but thanks fo da feed
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
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Post by daTruth »

i agree wit duc3 on some longer bars, but it was still a nice read, you spit da truth and dats was sup
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aiight well atleast you left feed thanks
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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cus nearly 30 odd views two pieces of feed left ya know
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Viral »

this was a tight piece...i like the usage of words and the way it was structured...has a good point of view to it too....keep it up mayne
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aight i'm workin on my next drop wit dagreatest sjould be by tomos or the day after check that out then yeah
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Arvincible »

good shit man, the vocab style is fresh and im feelin this type of concept.
everything else has been said.


Welxome to illest by the way.
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wot do you mean welcome to illest U already said that when i got here
a month ago ya
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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