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Scip
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Check How I'm Viewed, The Best When I Spew
I Flex In The Booth, Either Riding In The Lex Or The Coup
On My Presidential Shit, Techs In The Suit
That'll Give Ya'll The Run's Like Mexican Food

When Ya Dough Shrinks, And Ya Flow Stinks, Tryin For Scip, Shit
I'll Give You Ten To Go Think, While I Mend Ya Ho's Kinks
Cuz My Rhymes Are Eye Openers That Tend To Show Chinks
That I'll Ball, Point Blank, Like Pens With No Ink

But For Real…

Puttin On Pounds, Who Else Can Get Weight
You Felt In Which Way, Leave This Kid Touched,
Dudes Dealt With In Sick Ways, Who Else Can Fix Base
I'll Have Em Fiend Out Like Juelz' Mixtape

This Dude Acting Hard, I'll End That Little Fad
Scip Stays Pulling Strings Like Tryin To Bring The Fiddle Back
Blazing The Piff , Ya'll Stay On The Dick, The Kids'll Gasp
Cuz Ya'll Follow The Rainbow Like A Skittles Ad

Scip's Name'll Have You Squirming When Mentioned
Turning Attentive, My Words Are Incentives,
Too Funny To Watch, Got Money On Lock
Cuz I'll Put Bonds Behind Bars, Like Baseball Players Serving A Sentence
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- Mutual -
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Post by - Mutual - »

woahh this sum nice shit if you ask me
9/10
nice multies
nice flow
stayed on point

When Ya Dough Shrinks, And Ya Flow Stinks, Tryin For Scip, Shit
I'll Give You Ten To Go Think, While I Mend Ya Ho's Kinks
Cuz My Rhymes Are Eye Openers That Tend To Show Chinks
That I'll Ball, Point Blank, Like Pens With No Ink

my fave bit^
man all of it was my favourite but this bit i liked the best
nice shit man
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Khan »

yo i liked it, shit came hard, i liked the muiltz not all of them fell into place but other than i like it alot.

good shit
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thanks b

uppin for feed ill hit urs up in return
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Post by Arvincible »

lmfao punches were great man

skittles and barry bonds, who can beat a piece like this? lol

great freestyle man, i loved the flow and the delivery, you better bring this kind of style to the tourney so we can just take it home ya know!!

9.5/10 shittt! peace
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