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DressToKill
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Its Dress..Hes Made To Be Def,If I Let Up You'll All Be Hatin Me Next
You Cant Be Overplaying My Rep,I Touched More Breasts And Thies Than A KFC Chef!
I Eat Mc's,Beat Them G's Still Most Dudes Have Sworn Thy'd Get Through Me
But Im Fly As Hell,And My Rides Out Of This World Like That Transformer Movie!
You Aint Punching Dress Your Hitting Air..Lyrically This Isn't Fair
I Aint Gangsta But You Should Know I Roll With More G's Than A Millionaire!
You Know Every Drop Ive Came Hard,You Go No Drive And A Lame Heart
My Flow Are Raw As Fuck And Ive Jumped On More Tracks Than A Race Car

Short but sweet
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Post by Gutta »

race car line was a lil played but yuh ya shit was short and sweet and u had good wordplay homie ya style pretty smooth

keep droppi dress
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Yeah thanks dude..appreciated..as soon as I posted it I thought I actually heard it somewhere else before so I was like shit! I hope they realise that its just played haha
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Post by HKX »

dis shit was short and sweet nice drop not bad nigga u had enough punchlines 4 a short drop 2
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Thanks dude
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Key Was aiight ..
I Thought it Would Be More impressive Comin From U Seein ya Disses ..
A lot of Played Joints ..
It Wasn't Bad Tho Fam ..
Multies Were On Point ..
Everything Was Pretty Decent
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
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Post by DressToKill »

Sorry to disapoint..il try and come better next time
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