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Is It Fine You Denyin Sayin I Was Lien When I Said I Was Pushin Tha Iron?
..When Im Firin My Nine Its Like Benchin Players How I Put'Em On Pine...
Stop HIDING!!..Yo Azz Crying Where Yo Heart NOW!..Its Dark Out....
Shoulda Known You Didnt Wanna Start..BLLLOOW!!...Now You In A Zombie State
You Just Jivin But I Wouldnt Call Him Jj..But Definitely Tha One We Hate...
This Dumb Is Cake...You Not Alive So What Are We Facing...My Heart Pacin..
Now Not Alive...6 Feet Is Thee Hard Placement..
I Ain Scared Of Niggas Comin Back!! Matta A Fact You'll See My Niggas Going After Dead ...Similar TO Reincarnation!
Guess Yo!..Az My Tech Spoke Niggas Catch Ghost Faster Than Tha Scooby Doo Detective Agency...
Less Smoke So Rep Close...Betray Us..And You'll Get Wrecked In Pavement G...
You Don't Wanna Run This Route..Nigga You Spit Doubt...Studio Gangstas...Tha Recording Booth is Like A Laxative...Just So Niggas Could Get They Shit Out(PUSSY)[/align]

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You need to match ya multies up there is alot of forced multies here..you got awesome concepts man..the scooby doo line was prob my fav but the multie was thrown off to hell..This was decently nice but I beleive with better multies the flow would be helped..more complexity would be present and it would just help overall..stay up dude
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yeah man nice multies
stayed on point nice flow
great concept
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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