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Haz
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You Niggaz Act Like i Loss My Touch,
Cause i "Ain Feelin" Da Dick Ridin Get OFF MY CLUTCH!
U Sucha "Blunt Niggah" i'll TOSS MY DUTCH u Break-it-Down
Admit how u Da Fakist-Clown To Hit-Trackz You Spit-Crack?
U Spit Game?Na.Bein Home Frm a Tripz Da Only Way U GIT-BACK!
SIT-BACK..in ya Rusty-Throne Trust-Me-Homez u Wont Bust-Thee-Chrome
Cash Stacz?? Like Ethiopianz u Dunt got HUSKEE-BONEZ or Lusty-Homez..
Plus Da Shoez on ya Car Big As da Kickz Dat Clown KRUSTY-OWN/
i Done Fuckd Wid Da "Bull i" Dont Care Bout Nobodyz-Dartz
Dat Meanz i Say Fuc "Sub Limbz" Like Dropin Sists BODY-PARTZ
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Dead Silence
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Post by Dead Silence »

nice shit
loved the multies in it

SIT-BACK..in ya Rusty-Throne Trust-Me-Homez u Wont Bust-Thee-Chrome
Cash Stacz?? Like Ethiopianz u Dunt got HUSKEE-BONEZ or Lusty-Homez..
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was that a diss to HKX?
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- Mutual -
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Post by - Mutual - »

man nice multies
flowed nicely
stayed on point
nice punches
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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DressToKill
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Post by DressToKill »

The Krusty part actually made me laugh haha..nice shit duke im glad you fixed up ya structure its really working for ya
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Cash Stacz?? Like Ethiopianz u Dunt got HUSKEE-BONEZ or Lusty-Homez..
Plus Da Shoez on ya Car Big As da Kickz Dat Clown KRUSTY-OWN/

^^ fave part

this was decent, the multis stood out most, one thing i didnt like was the redundant use of chronies and phony in like a couple lines, but other than that haz ur really steppin it up man good shit fam.

nice read, keep it comin
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Post by MesaR »

pretty good drop i liked this more then most your other recent writtens, pretty funny read with the punchlines, multis were ok.. nothing that exciting though, keep posting
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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|.R.SON.aLL.|
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Yeah This Drop Was Decent ..
Maybe cus I Excepted More From You ..
But ya Multies Was Good Fam ..
I Liked Tha Lines That Was Quoted ..
Keep Doin You and You Gon Keep Gettin Better Man ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..
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