Crazy Rap 2

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thats right i seem to write better rhymes when it aint need to be based on shit this one is a bit mo off course than the last one and probably hasnt got as many multies but is still pretty good shit

Chorus:
Fuck my last shit i wasnt in the right state of mind to spit
ya gonna get ya ass kicked i aint gone ask,QUIT!! reverse then split

Verse 1
see i'm goin back to the crazy rap anxiety filled maniac attacks
hobos on the street bringem death nothin after that
my aftermath is a fat guy in a suit wit a beard carryin gifts black boots
on the roof wit reindeers
shit thats santa shit rudolph stealin my food
make off wit da bag cus i got no proof
so i'm gonna have to let loose
i'm not allowed to vote in arv's battles but why bring in dead silence
wot da fucked he do to be encorporated into lyrical violence
its because i'm crazy this is crazy rap 2
ahead of number 1 and probably higher like a lazy crack dude
tryna get get money fo bein funny if ya a comedien
this guy fucked up tells shitty jokes then tells everybody he a medium
phycic wot eva ya wanna call im this jigga was never dope
i dont say that every day goin down a buildin wit out a rope
fuckin faggot celebrities bitchin bout how they cant cope
bush glad cus he gone leave but like people listened when he spoke
i'd rather fuck wit santa or even maybe choke
nobody fuckin does shit nobody messes my exelent
cause when i'm potent i squash rodents and make them irrelevant
seem needed as my beam speeded past at the speed of light
in need to fight nah fuck evrybody i agreed in flight
cause i was high and needed another blunt to smoke
but ya gunna need a gun to get this cunt to toke

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[Dead Silence]

i liked this one from ya.
but it really didnt stay on topic
first santa clause than arvs voting shit than comedians than bush
u gotta stay on topic more.
and if u didnt want to than u should transit into the next topic smooth. not just jump into it. speak about how they are or can be related in some way. its rap and ur creative so think of a way to do so. but the lyrics were straight good looks.

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thnxs preciated
uppin feed

(clears throat) uhm yeah (cough)

[Dead Silence]

*clears throat*umm u mean feed right?

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uppin feed