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Fridaynight Freestyle version First in a While

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Yeah, i haven't dropped anything, or really recorded or written anything in a while. I've been watching alot of battles, and jammin some lyrical cats so i felt like spittin. Freestyle, so i slipped up a couple times a lil bit tryin ta get the words out, but jeah.

feedback appreciated.


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You got a commical type swagger imo..for a freestyle its decent im feeding as I listen you got a little bit of a flow going now..is it me or is your mic cuttin out a little in places?All in all its pretty cool..
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wasnt bad pretty good back beat tho keep'em comin
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

LMAOOOOO

This Shit Was Funny....This Was Kinda Horrible...Was You Drunk Off Anti Freezing Coolant?
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Post by Dead Silence »

ummmm.
quality blows asshole.

lyrics good for a freestyle.

beat was nice. but a lil bit too much bass
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Post by HKX »

u need practice dawg but shit was nicer than wat i've heard 4rm other nigga keep droppin son
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Post by 8th »

Duc3. Whoever you are, quiet down.


as for the rest of you, appreciate the feed. and yeah, the quality sucks cause my mic wasn't working when i felt like flowin, so i just used my comp. mic. but jeah, grazie.
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rotfl...at duc3 comment...im cryin

yea try again all i can say!!
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

8th wrote:Duc3. Whoever you are, quiet down.


as for the rest of you, appreciate the feed. and yeah, the quality sucks cause my mic wasn't working when i felt like flowin, so i just used my comp. mic. but jeah, grazie.
LoL Dude Aint My Fault That Freestyle Sucked Arse...
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Post by 8th »

again, not sure who you are. Also, not interested in your thoughts.
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