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BAck At it Ft. Mutual Hostility

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[align=center]..Ayo..Mutual you Know The Drill Homie School
These Cats.!!

..Mutual Hostility..
now ya'll heard of G but it's absurd to me
ya more like a blurb to see we can tell the story see
cus i'm here SDotW we freein and jus beein are selves
we dont fake and make bullshit so are shit sells
i could do but yah fell when ya talkin it's bullshit we smell
i write shit dispite it's evilness we dont need no fight,SPIT
we battle with verses curses and watch as this fucka disperses
i gotta a battle wit TOYH he hasnt yet ya know who da worse is
gettin at me bout my vote now he reverses back into his cave
where he brave but i got no beef but c'mon battle bitch it's strange
i didnt used to want to battle yet i did anyway
was i lead a stray or lead to devils ways
we dont want no heavy metal play we want war
blood n gore as i stood n sore this shit happenin it would've tore
down this rap nation this creation and its facin
death like it was in it's pacin and stride along spacin
itself out across da world in it's wrong casin
tagged wrong they think raps about violence
nonsense gangsta's was jus sick of the silence
they wanted noise but it came with shit made fights
tryna ruin are parade lights nah stop n fade right
man evry fucka get nervous dont be bopthered bout stage fright
make sure every thing was slayed right gun to the heart
wanna battle nah you know i already won from da start
its not fun they jus are really starting to get on my nerves
evry lyrics he slurrs evry spirit he heard
mafucka there no such thing as ghosts i hear it occured
as i answer and revenge it appears it surburb
wot eva happened to world peace no smashin a girls teeth
now it jus appears that we hurl beef like grief slit
enough pack it up wit this steep shit man we beep it
off the road like its fuckin molaria with weak spit


..Damn AYO!! Let Me Show These Niggaz..Im On Some Wayne Shit Fam!


...S.DoT W
if you dont understand the bars stay the fuck out of jail
if you cant withstand the heat stay the fuck outta hell
cause im bringin it steady and im gonna prevail
im that bullet that killed versachi while he checkin the mail

....DAMN!!

If you dont kno im live stay the fuck up off me
how u on the grind but can fuck up coffee?
im the livest emcee,rockin from Jerz-E
F bitches gettin more "bush" than washington dc
fam check your comp,guaranteed it'll be me,
yall niggaz on comaz,i wake u out of a deep sleep
"I" at the end like C.G. will be the last man standin u see me?
ima cold kannon-n-sleezy, i'll fuck the C off a coohie im breezy
when i "cover girls" thats easy,from another world,not tv
but this my reality,fo sho but not for "show" like "ALI G"
best beleive like Cosmeto- ima "Lo-gy"(low-g)
sellin ex fo yrs,so i aint talkin bout beers when im poppin a "old-e"
plus i keep a vest on to block shots like a goalee,
i slice niggaz like hogie's for talkin outta their goatee
yall owe me, my style original check credentials fam
cause with styles, i be flossin without a dental plan
i feel i been "wrappin" longer than "reynolds" damn
and when pussy involed..i got more skin's than a receiver hand's
ya chick left you cause you had a small wood like beaver dam's
my flow got a perminant high, and "never-land" like "peter-pan"
i'll sever-hands with clevers-man,im from a land where leaders-stand
every time u spit fire the heaters-jam,
my flow raw i "cook-keys" like keeblers-can


...Datz How Da Fuk We Do IT niggaz..Holla At USE!!![/align]
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damm nice drop Dot uppin votes
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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thanks man bump!
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BUMP!!
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uppin votes illest
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Cee4 »

overall good. Mutual Hostility this the best ive seen from you. Ur definitly elevating keeping it up. Clearly SDotW is more expierenced but both came nice here.

If you dont kno im live stay the fuck up off me
how u on the grind but can fuck up coffee?
im the livest emcee,rockin from Jerz-E
F bitches gettin more "bush" than washington dc
^^
best from SDot


not really any standout bars from Mutual but the whole thing is on a higher level with the multis flow, vocab ..etc
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thanks cee uppin feed pls
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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i didnt used to want to battle yet i did anyway
was i lead a stray or lead to devils ways
we dont want no heavy metal play we want war
blood n gore as i stood n sore this shit happenin it would've tore
down this rap nation this creation and its facin
death like it was in it's pacin and stride along spacin
itself out across da world in it's wrong casin
tagged wrong they think raps about violence
nonsense gangsta's was jus sick of the silence
they wanted noise but it came with shit made fights
tryna ruin are parade lights nah stop n fade right
man evry fucka get nervous dont be bopthered bout stage fright

fav part from u Mutual^


yall owe me, my style original check credentials fam
cause with styles, i be flossin without a dental plan
i feel i been "wrappin" longer than "reynolds" damn
and when pussy involed..i got more skin's than a receiver hand's
ya chick left you cause you had a small wood like beaver dam's
my flow got a perminant high, and "never-land" like "peter-pan"
i'll sever-hands with clevers-man,im from a land where leaders-stand
every time u spit fire the heaters-jam,
my flow raw i "cook-keys" like keeblers-can

not my fav part but prolly the best from u Sdot^

Sdot definetely had the lyrical advantage but mutual held his own too.
sdot urs flowed alot better then mutuals did. mutual work on ur flow homie and try incorporatin multis n inner rhymes n stuff more within ur lines,it'll help keep the interest in ur pieces. keep droppin both of u,u seem 2 compliment each others style which is kinda hard 2 do nowadays. keep@it

peace
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thanks for the feed man
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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