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Part Two of Two Lost Souls

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Part Two of Two Lost Souls

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Days have passed since there last confrontation and neither one of them are willing to admit defeat. Maybe it's pride, maybe it's not. Whatever it may be these two are stubborn as all hell. He still remembers the night he felt it all flash before his eyes and suddenly...they were no more. Weeks prior to this night he had this feeling in the back of his mind something wasn't right. She stopped calling him by the little nick names they gave each other, she stopped writing him notes, stopped calling, basically wiped his existence from her heart. He managed to sit her down and reveal what was running through his mind. Little did he know he just ruined the greatest thing he ever obtained. However it wasn't his fault completely, she too had played a role in the romance fading. He would chase her when she ran, hugged her when she pushed away, and still stayed by her side though he felt the love slipping through his hands. In the midst of this passion there was another man that captured her attention. There he was sitting alone trying to deny what he saw hoping it was just a dream. Pinching himself, splashing water on his face telling his self he would wake up. Sadly it wasn't a dream it was all too real. His eyes became watery and chest started hurting. Crawling across the floor trying to scream for someone to save him as he witnesses every moment they shared come to life again. Holding his chest remembering all the dances, all the sweet talks, all the promises, every word she whispered. Crying to himself he confronted her with what he saw and it began. The beginning of the end. They argued yet again trading excuses as to why the love was dying, trying to place the blame on each others shoulders. Bad blood was boiling and neither one of them knew what to do. Suicidal tendencies bloomed inside their minds trying to forget the pain of losing the love. It was as if the grim reaper came and swallowed their souls because, although there eyes had color the inner pain caused them to turn black and cold. Shouting with fiery they dissected each others hearts verbally until they were forced into silence. Tears racing down there cheeks like tiny snowballs on a hill. Nothing would be the same again. The magic has burned out, the love has crumbled into shattered pieces. Both sitting speechless like a person without a tongue, they try to spice up the conversation with jokes. It covers the pain slightly but you can hear it in there voices. As they hang up the phone acting like nothings wrong, he can't help but wonder what went wrong. What didn't he do right? Was it her? Was it the other man included? In the words of Def Leppard i guess its 'too late for love' for these two. One heart, one mind, one soul, now splits into two hearts, two minds and two lost souls.
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damm man same as the other one flowed well good shit ya'll have to carry this on ya good shit
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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good looks on the feed for both of em man,leave a link 2 what u want feeded on
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by HKX »

shit was nice son like da concept and shit
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thanks man
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Post by LadySam »

'too late for love' for these two. One heart, one mind, one soul, now splits into two hearts, two minds and two lost souls.

the ending was my fav. Good story though.
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best poem about a internet relationship thats been posted this week on illest good job you sad little creature
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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im glad u managed to find the time to try and make urself look important again,thanks for readin tho
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