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Kush With Seeds, Ya'll Couldn't Push A T, Even When You Chose Clips To Get
I Move Bricks To Kids, Who Say That Dudes Sick As Shit, You'll Listen Quick
When I Grab Ya Bitch And Fist Her Then, Spits So Hot, Leave All Yous Blisterin,
And Everyone Keeps Tellin Me To Lighten Up, Like Nutritionists

You Flukes Are All The Same, Step and Watch As Ya Group Gets Mauled And Raped
Slingin The Bars And Bringin The Arson, Yall Think It's A Ruthless Bomb Parade
You Douches Are All Just Fake, Like Unathletic Kids You're Clueless For Balls And Base
Scip Just Lettin Shit Passover Time Like Waiting For The End of A Jewish Holiday

Punches Crack Your Core, Ya Center Bends, Cop The Quick Cash
Shots Make You Split Fast, Like Checkin To See If You're Limber Kid
My Spits, You'll Remember Phlegm, I'll Simmer Then, You'll Shiver When I Deliver Them
Kid, I'll Take You To The Back Woods When I Stomp You With My Timberlands

Flows Dope, Verbs'll Rock Ya, I Mean My Words'll Drop Ya
Scip'll Have A Strip Down Like Wearing Just a Shirt And Boxers
I'll Bend This Frail Fraud, Not NFL Squads, But After The Third Choppah
You All Will See Hawks, Quicker Than Intense Bird Watchers

I'm The King I Summon Droughts And Mob Hits, Son You Dumb And Doubt The Hottest?
My Punches'll Come Around Ya Sockets, Cuz I Bring Heat Like The Suns Out In The Tropics
My Movement Is Just Gritty, I'm Movin Units In The City, Then I'm Choosin A Bitch B
I'll Have Shawty Low, On The Dick, Like D4L Members Comin Out The Closet

These Guys Are Use To Wood On There Ass, Like Benchin These Fools
No Need To Mention I'm Cool, But Ya'll Gassed Up Like Engines On Full
Bars Raw, Sentences Cruel, And When The Tension Arose Bitch
I'll Grab The Snub Nose Quick, So Literally You're Sensin The Tool

…Fuck It Throw Multies At Em

This is How The Shit Goes, Scip Knows, The Way I Spit Flows
Got All You Bitch Foes, Like Clocks, Ticked Yo, I'm Sick Tho
Talk Shit, The Hawk'll Spit, Givin You A Limp To Walk With
Cuz The Way I Bust A Rhyme, Ya'll Think I'm A Member of Flipmode

Ya'll Ho's Wanna Tussle, Show A Little Muscle, Flex And Get Snuffed
Texts Are Just Tough, Like Bad Gamblers, All Ya Vets Are Just Bluffs
Who's Next That's Up, I'll Smack These Faggots, Clap These Maggots
I'll Grip The Chrome, Put The Clip To Ya Dome, When I Blast It's Tragic

Shits Classic, Should Get Drafted, For The Way I Shoot, I Amaze The Dude
Crazed For Loot, Like I Hot Boxed It, I Blazed The Booth, With Flames, Then Poof
The Best Kept Secret, I'll Shame The Truth, Fuck Some Bitches, Run A Train
Make Sure The Guns Are Tame, Put The Heat To Your Chest, Lungs Inflamed
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Post by DressToKill »

This was hot man..rhymin was on and you had some nice plays..like the lighten up one I also thought that your flow was catchy as hell..the structure was different than the usual but it was hot..keep at it man
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Post by MagicMark »

yeah, this was good

flow and multis were on lock, content could have been better in some places, but that nutrionist line was hot, in a few places it felt you more in it for the multis than the content yano? maybe thats what it was...

anyways, it was still good, most of the lines where hot, and it was easy to read

good shit..
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good looks...upppin
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Post by - Mutual - »

multies and flow was dope
8.5/10
good shit
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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