Jus Words......Maybe

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i aint done one in a while so it's a bit rusty but well
i think the hook is a famous sayin from some where jus so's ya know
i dont really stay on topic wit the hook jus writin wot eva comes to mind

Hook:
in the past is history tomorrow a mystery even in the heavens
his mood u lift cus 2 day is a gift thats y they call it the present

Verse 1
in unity-there-is-strength
to die wot community-wud-go-to-that-length
build a bridge build an army of scurryin-men
hurryin-then to have fun in the last days-they-have
had no fun when they were young they were way-to-mad
the rations enraged passions not even the slaves-could-have
smart in a gang sticks out a pussy but brave-in-clad
today is a relic so relish it no memebership sell-it-bitch
yet they see solus sunny opportunity to sell-us-shit
when we fell-they-spit if i die hell-gone-split
but G i might not be lyrical-see
as i grow out of bein a criminal amazed thinkin its a miracle-be
no hidden messages with no sub liminal-fee
okay i'm no lupe on ya see i'm here
if i'm not i'm there watch me appear
Cham was talkin bout me when he said " so fly my nickname should be up here"
errbody stand and they lear at me as if i was fear
they scared they shud be cus i RUN MY HOOD SEE

Hook

Verse 2
the second verse
no time to rehearse spit and we burst
talk shit in reverse takin in shit which worse
in which verse shit i used that rhyme twice gotta dispearse
evenly cause if not i may drive off in a hearse
give me time to emerge and do not emerse emerge messages fill it wit a curse
i take in all of my day fine it's no surprise
i hold it tight wait fo a bit sell it cus it's gold-in-my-eyes
i'm one crazy mafucka well thats wot they told-in-replies
am i really? yeah i got a strong hold-in-the-skies
it will unfold-and-demise
any fuckin mafcukin hater thats not even 30 years old-yet-dispise
cus i'm the black death so they hold they last breath
i'm the cause of there stress
causin heart attacks like old men finally gettin a hand on a breast
and the rest is off topic really off topic
if i held a gun to ya head would u tell me to pop-it
a picture of u put it up in a locket
then hand it over give it to ya daughter
tell her wot ya brought-her
my rhymes are straight slaughter
ya see yesterday history 2 morrow a mystery yet they call this a gift
there will be no future i kill ya all and thats it
rennovated-yet-we-missed-em
i kill ya all this my mental-rated-system
ha ha

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thanks man
uppin feed

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uppin feed pls

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BUMP!¬!

[Arvincible]

its from kung fu panda dont act like u dont know...

lol first verse was way better and balanced than the second but yeh the whole thing had a cool mood to it. Nice imagery in the beginning of the first verse, about the soldiers, i didnt lke some of the multi attempts though, some didnt go like

unity-there-is-strenght...

then you went off nd tried it with

community-would-go-to-that-length

those arent multis so dont put dashes in places they dont belong, other than that im beginning to become impressed with how much uve improved.

good stuff man keep it up, ur not gonna stay where u are, elevate...

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thanks arv

uppin feed pls

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yeah and i know it's from Kung Fu Panda