first drop

[Tragedy]

tha most ill of tha illest rollin wit militant killaz
stackin these earnings i earn un until they stack to the celin
filling ya brain wit these verses
converted scriptures from churches//
such an intelligent person wit bursting lyrical urges
im spittin raw till im fallin into tha ground in my coffin//
put on my mask and my gloves hit the block and go shoppin
aint no stoppin the lyrical prophet im tight like a locket//
alot a niggaz be talkin but dont be doin the walkin
and i be smoking on chocolate blunts the size of rockets//
something like baby huey but instead i COCK BACK AND POP IT
you bitch nigaz better stay calm
OR IMA COME OUT THA SUNROOF WIT THA MOXBURY DRAWN

a little sumtin for my first drop
feed

[Haz]

Not Impressive..
im Sayin .. It's Ya Firs Drop Though..
Dont Fuck With Played Concepts..
ya whole Flow Could be betta..
ya Could come Harda.. Don't have Much To Say

[- Mutual -]

man i think the exact opposite i mean this was great to me i liked the flow
i liked the concept and good first drop man keep'em comin

[MadKNiFe]

Hmmn. . Maybe the verse was not properly structured but it had nice flows, I must say and the first few lines were cool. .

[Bobby Star]

^^ I agree first few lines and flow was good.. overall imma give it a 7/10 but yo iF you gonna do a Cypher make sure it got sum punche's coz you know ya gotta stay Fly n Fresh like New sneakers! ha