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Arvincible
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street pharmacist diss

Post by Arvincible »

Nigga ran away when I called him out...bitch ass punk.

This Fat Beaner on a comp idolizes big-pun, ill just drop ya with a sick, quick-punch,
See I make pricks-run..he'll read this, n watch him leave for another fuckin six-months,
Man U can't choose, my punches keep connectin just makin my own hands bruise,
I really can't lose, cuz Ill leave pharmacy/farm-messy like the animals fuckin ran loose!
Street is more proof that with thirty two wins im just gettin more-of-illest's-hate,
I don't give a fuck faggot! imma just own pharm/farm like some rural-realestate!
Shit talkin in the cyphs with 2 losses to back it up, what the fuck are you reppin-son?
I reckon All I gotta do is put my feet on asphalt, and its already you im steppin-on*
Fuckin scrub, u blockin my view? Then imma just wash this window-stain-out
this kiddo's flamed out, only time I heard 'S.P.' nice was when nintendo's-came-out!
See I bring the result of poison's harm(death) arvincible got ya boy's alarmed,
Cuz im rushin through 'street's' like a kansas twister.. straight up destroyin pharm's/farms...

Learn to keep that mouth shut u faggot.
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Post by - Mutual - »

shit this piece came good wit the nameplay
the puches as well in the name play was dope
8.5/10
keep'em comin
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Post by DressToKill »

Pretty straight diss..the Farm-Messy bar was pretty cool..you had some original ideas and definently showed that your lightyears ahead of that other dude..nice personal in the first bar also..keep up duke
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Lol thanks for the feed toyh, mutual, and dress..its much appreciated.
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Post by Omega Bill »

This was a nice diss and had some good creativity. He really shoulda came harder.

This Fat Beaner on a comp idolizes big-pun, ill just drop ya with a sick, quick-punch,
See I make pricks-run..he'll read this, n watch him leave for another fuckin six-months,

Good punch. Good TRUE punch cause dude is always leaving then comes back trying too hard.

Man U can't choose, my punches keep connectin just makin my own hands bruise,
I really can't lose, cuz Ill leave pharmacy/farm-messy like the animals fuckin ran loose!

Good CREATIVE punchy. Wittiness is key here and you utilized the wordplay and nameplay well.

Street is more proof that with thirty two wins im just gettin more-of-illest's-hate,
I don't give a fuck faggot! imma just own pharm/farm like some rural-realestate!

Liked the punch. Didnt like the first line though.

Shit talkin in the cyphs with 2 losses to back it up, what the fuck are you reppin-son?
I reckon All I gotta do is put my feet on asphalt, and its already you im steppin-on*

Good punch, good personal, good verbal attack.

Fuckin scrub, u blockin my view? Then imma just wash this window-stain-out
this kiddo's flamed out, only time I heard 'S.P.' nice was when nintendo's-came-out!

Creative yet again, good nameplay and wordplay yet again. One of the better bars in this diss.

See I bring the result of poison's harm(death) arvincible got ya boy's alarmed,
Cuz im rushin through 'street's' like a kansas twister.. straight up destroyin pharm's/farms...

Creative, alright punch, but wasn't feeling this bar too much.

Overall - 8/10

Had some nice wordplay, nameplay and creativity. Definetley better than his diss towards you. Some lines were weak, but some lines were killer so it balanced out.
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