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Post by Dead Silence »

*shakes head*
i wasnt impressed at all with this diss.

This Kid Far Past His Prime How Can R Son All?
^
wtf R Son All?i read this line multiply times and still dont get it

Rell You Been Done You Surpassed Ass Then Buns
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again wtf?

Dont Run Again Homie When Shit Starts Gettin Hot You Always Kickin Rocks
^
what does Kicking rocks hafta do with that line?

Seen 'Em in Broke Back Mountain.. Tha Silly Cowboy Tha Type To Hold A Guy
^
*sighs*terribly closer

Rell A Lame Prick He A Nigga That Tames Dick
i invited Him To My Party An Ended Up Fuckin Tha Chic He Came With
^liked it. nice opener

A Transvestite And Ethiopian Only Thing You Missin is Aids
No Punches? i'll Leave Ya Jaw Broken When i'm Spittin Ya Way
^best puunch

like i said i wasnt impressed with this in anyway
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Damn ..
I Was Exceptin a lot More ..
This Shit Was Weak Tho ..
Best Punch Was Tha Opener ..
After That Everythin else Fell Off Tho ..
Only Thing That Was Solid Was Tha Flow ..
You Tried to Explain That Line ..Either Way it Wasnt Nice ..
I Thought You Woulda Came Back Wit a Banger ..
Ya Collabo Verse Was Better Than This ..

Oh and it`s R.Son.All ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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RELL FiaSCO

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Post by Dead Silence »

i read his name
and no i havnt heard that lol

im sorry that im not up-todate with todays Ebonics or slang.
just tryiin to leave ya kid jeeze
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Post by - Mutual - »

this shit was pretty dope
flowed pretty good
i liked the punches
the nameplay added sum extra good shit
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by -ViP »

1. Flow is Lil Off, I Wish You Could Do Betta,
2. Punches Kinda Gay, Played Out Like Momma Jokes.
3. To Much Gun Play, Come On You Not A Thug, Bitch Nigga Diss Him.
4. Dead Silence Coulda Done Betta, He Aint Nice Rememba?
5. From What I Seen, You Aint Touching Me My Nigga.
6. I Coulda Wrote Betta With My Eyes Close And With No Keyboard.
7. LOL Quick Key, My Nigga This Aint No Quick Key, If it is You Need To Stop Koss This Shit One of You Worse Shit YOu Eva dropp Since That Millz Battle.
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yea

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keep trying
go for it
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Post by -ViP »

Nahh Fuck This Nigga, He Tried To Come At Somebody He Knows He Cant Take.
i Say From The Start TheGuyYouHate Had No Chance Against Rell.

Anyways Hey Sickest Chick in The Game, I Know You New In This Bitch,
I Know TheGuyYouHate I Slapped Him, You Would Think I'm His Daddy,
He's Afraid Of Me, And He Battled Millz One of The Nicest Dudes In Here,
Millz Didnt Try His Hardest He Did Lightwork,
But TheGuyYouHate Took Like 3 Weeks To Accept The Call Out, Just So He Can Pre Write Some Weak Shit, Trust Me Its Not That Good.
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Post by Theou »

It was alright. I was lost at times (probably due to me being new), and some things didn't fit right.

"A Transvestite And Ethiopian Only Thing You Missin is Aids
No Punches? i'll Leave Ya Jaw Broken When i'm Spittin Ya Way "

Loved that part.
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