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-TraMaTiK-
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some shit i threw together cuz i got bored lemme kno what ya think


u cud be dumb blind and sightless
and still see that in time ta write this
ud have'ta be inside my mind ta fight with
all the sparks and lines that ignite it
im talkin bout the fire that'll blast thru
when i hitcha wack crew did i ever ask u
for ur opinion?nah dont come back dude
cuz i dont want the bullshit infact u
shud look at this kid spit witness the sickness
watch how i flip this with amazing quickness
u grabbin clips?QUIT cuz ill make ya chick split
from ya side when i deliver the thick shit
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Post by - Mutual - »

finished pretty strong
my sorter flow there
nice multies
keep'em mcomin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Chernobyl »

Like guy above me said The End part


shud look at this kid spit witness the sickness
watch how i flip this with amazing quickness
u grabbin clips?QUIT cuz ill make ya chick split
from ya side when i deliver the thick shit


Was really Sick,Prop's Man
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good

Post by sickest chick in the game »

good you did good tho
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