Track originally was with my boy, he went first and spit 24 bars and then I went second and spit 24 bars. This is just my 24 bars. Feedback is greatly appreciated I'm still trying to get the hang of recording.

Thanks a lot for the feedback this is great lol I joined like 3 different sites before I found this one, and none of them ever gave feedback. I will definitly try to work on my delivery and emotion big time I feel the same way actually, and I will definitly start listening and dropping feedback on ...

Yea man I would love for you to mix some stuff for me. Message me on how we would go about that.

Thanks for the feedback too

For those who use Soundclick, what is the highest one of your tracks ever made it on the charts?

So far I made 4 tracks and my highest was

Charts position
» highest in charts: # 948 (1,617,086 songs currently listed in HipHop)

This is one of my tracks. The others are on soundclick.com/emeye2010 .

I just started recording 3-4 months ago. Some feedback and critisism would really help. There are 4 songs on my soundclick page, that are all between 1 and 3 minutes long. All of them feature one of my friends on the track too ...