I love the vibe for this, really mellow but still delivers. the swisher line is also insane.

Thanks, I'll try

Thanks man

always remain perilous, show no form of gentleness/
i'm "venomous" from the beginning like thoughts of "Genesis"/
DAMN

put you in a turbulent concussion, no room for permanent assumptions/
your just begging to die like poisonous supplement consumption
I died

Thanks!

These so-called artists intimidated by intelligence
Afraid of the truth, they just revel in irrelevance
Given the gift of pestilence, haunted by plagues of ignorance
Start talkin’ the bullshit but just to afraid to finish it
Need to concentrate on the future so take some ritalin
Been yelled at and ...

Added my feedback.

Thanks a lot man, I'll keep doing my best.

Wow this was nasty. I agree, your multies were sick and I liked the message as well.

I saw the other few you posted today and your style definitely improved. The rhymes make a lot more sense.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/making-classic-vt22907.html#p175118
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-team-vt22908.html#p175120



My first written here.

On the mic I am a riot like Toronto,
integral to the game’s survival, call me Squanto
Flow too original to be leased, not a condo
had to ...

I'm an emcee from Virginia just trying to get better at what I do, I learned about the site from a kid at school.