Life is just one big ass chess match

Now I've heard you speak of pawns and kings but...honestly
you've forgotten the in between

You've painted scenes of

mindless masses attending


[/quote]mindless masses[quote]
while masterminds pass us without attracting glances

but

What makes a ...

Honestly your mediocre motives make no sense.
Why would you test the best when your best bet's
just to bet on the best
thats like orlando magic "rushing" just to tackle the jets
Im in a different ballpark boy get back on the bench
you think your rippin but the difference is I know how to vent
I ...

"shit shat n shun to split splat n run"

I liked this rhyme scheme and woulda liked to see more on that flow. Pretty smooth reading throughout and some good visuals.

7.5/10 this was a good off the top to read on my boring ass easter sunday. Keep it up.

Thanks for the feedback guys. I really appreciate it and I will try to do more rap as well as poetry.

Now if nothing comes from what I wrote

At least I know I got a good poem :lol:

Now I've been told

there is lots of fish
well obviously but she's
the prettiest note in the symphony

Strait up

She's pretty from the neck up with a minimal amount of makeup
She's not an A cup but a step below C ...

Life is just one big ass chess match

Now I've heard you speak of pawns and kings but...honestly
you've forgotten the in between

You've painted scenes of

mindless masses attending


[/quote]mindless masses[quote]
while masterminds pass us without attracting glances

but

What makes a knight ...