Subsist - Kurse of Viral (diss)

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Thu Nov 23, 2006 11:08 pm

There you go.. Feeedback

Street Pharmacist · Post by **Street Pharmacist** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 4:20 am

this is okay o.O, but u sound like a arib...

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 7:15 am

no shit?

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 5:43 pm

This was straight man. I don't think you were trying to make the ultimate diss. Overall though I thought this was pretty good working with the accent and shit.

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:13 am

I'll give credit where credit is due. The instrumental...yea...I feel that. Shit was bangin...sounded kinda serious...but nigga...you got no flow. Maybe it was the accent...or the lack or talent...I dunno. But atleast ur shit was clearer than Demented Dickheads shit...so I'll give u props for dat. Overall diss-wise though...nah...I don't feel threatened or burnt. Close...but no cigar.

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 4:54 pm

I had more personals in there than all the random ass shit disses you ever wrote all together.

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 5:03 pm

since you're typically humble i won't be too harsh

like kurse said, the beat is ill, but your lyrics weren't quite up to par a basic rhyme scheme and no real creative lines, your flow isn't fluid at all you fall offbeat alot, your enunciation isn't bad for an arab but it still needs some work(enunciation is how clear you say words) your emotion is lacking too you sound like your just talking

basically you need alot of practice just try to record as much as you can as practice and you'll gradually start to get better

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 5:07 pm

can you give me a time exactly where i feel off beat cause i cant seem to understand.

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 5:15 pm

the times when you pause or rush lines i'm not gonna listen and give all the exact times

just try to be more fluid, you don't have to hit every snare to be on beat, just try to get a better sense of rhythm so when you flow it sounds natural and so it doesn't sound rushed and have awkward pauses, writing bars with around the same amount of syllables will help with that too

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Sun Nov 26, 2006 2:29 am

kurse...of?...viral diss...n im supposed to feel threatened?...i didnt listen to it..and for the fact that u cant even get the subject title right...im not gonna listen to it..especially addin on da reviews....but ummm nice goin..LOL.....n i havent even been here in like 5 days...HAAAA wata joke

P.S. i listened...if u rapped as good as da beats u used id feel hurt...lol and i couldnt understand much wit ur mumblin n grumblin...n u cant kill a virus wit antibiotics....HAAA!!...

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Sun Nov 26, 2006 3:32 am

Subsist wrote:I had more personals in there than all the random ass shit disses you ever wrote all together.

Sorry Gaysist...but you didn't. I heard 1...maybe 2 things that might've applied to me...and maybe 2 that applied to Viral...the rest was all camel-jibber. In otherwords you talked about nuthin. So yea...sorry...you didn't school me in that department either. Don't believe!? Ask around.

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Sun Nov 26, 2006 3:33 am

Subsist wrote:I had more personals in there than all the random ass shit disses you ever wrote all together.

Sorry Gaysist...but you didn't. I heard 1...maybe 2 things that might've applied to me...and maybe 2 that applied to Viral...the rest was all camel-jibber. In otherwords you talked about nuthin. So yea...sorry...you didn't school me in that department either. Don't believe!? Ask around.

precise · Post by **precise** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 7:22 am

ummm.... no comment dude

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