BL#5 Teflon vs M.O.E (Teflon 3-0)

[Dead Silence]

BL#5 Teflon vs M.O.E

Outcome-IMO

3-0 Teflon

Reason- Teflon's just on fire right now. M.O.E. is gonna get slaughtered. Good Luck.

6 Bars
Due 7/3/09
House Cats

[MOEstradamus]

ok well i guess ill check in and um how many bars is it 6 like the others and good luck teflon ill drop after you check

[Teflon]

Whats up man, and idk if thats for us to decide last two I've been in they told me the amount of bars we'll find out and go from there, goodluck.

[MOEstradamus]

yea lol

-- Tue Jun 30, 2009 7:34 pm --

Teflon stop rappin… you lack-n-skill, most of your verses are packed-n-filled…*
I’ll be the reason da “kids lost in development,” like the morning after-pill//**

Be a huslta and run after-mills, but its hard when you can’t sell-a-gram…
I could promote you to messenger, and you still couldn’t Tellagram//(Tell-a-gram)***

Ya never feel money man, cuz I LEFT-NO-green, it aint my fault you’ve never FELT-ON-weed…****
Did you notice, I used ya name in da last two multis, id figure I tell ya to help-da-read//

Now can’t ya see, a ghost rida is sumthin ya need, you might start winnin if you start suckin-cee…*****
Don’t say ya gonna kill b, you won’t step up you aint a fuckin-g, in da chat box the other night you kept duckin-me//******

Dis cake ya see, cuz ima ungrateful fuck, an uncaring punk, when I start beatin-the-dead…
Im thinking of robbin him while im layn in bed, cuz only then will “THE GAME” put heat-to-his-head//*******

I’ll kill ya like MJ, ya know have ya “holdin ya chest” like ya sayn-the-pledge…********
Ya hit da peek of ya fame, now this rappas fallin off n I just left him facen-da-ledge//


Explanations
*his verses sometimes have fillers in dem that cause him to lose out on some punches
** Morning after pill is what women take to try and stop babys from developing lol
***a messenger you know the people who say tellagram well as a hustler he can’t TELL A GRAM
**** TEFLON switch it around it spells LEFT NO and FELT ON
*****Cee4 is the txt champ he could suck him off for some good rhymes
******
Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:24 pmM.O.E » its cool dude just duck ill c ya in da ring one day hahahahahahaha
Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:19 pm M.O.E » man for real y u bein a pussy i just wana talk
Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:16 pm M.O.E » yo man be real come on y don't you wana talk am i dat mean lol
Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:14 pm M.O.E » i guess i wouldn't want to answer back either lol anyone else seein this lol
Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:11 pm M.O.E » i see you on Teflon are u mad at me cuz datll make me a sad lmaoooo
Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:06 pm M.O.E » u mad about my vote thier Teflon?
Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:55 pm M.O.E » lol
Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:48 pm Teflon » more votes in menace vs teflon some real votes please from members with more than 15 posts
I said some more and he never answered and I seen he was on
*******his avatar is of the game with guns to his head well people call the life the game and if I rob him ill put heat to his head I hope yall get that if not go kill ya self
********MJ died of a heart attack and ill have him holdin his heart like the U.S. pledge and heart attack

[K KiLLaH]

Bump

[Teflon]

Ducking you? What the fuck are you talking about and yea I cat swept that dude, but what do you know...Here's my point...


First off...
NO chick would fuck you, no matter how many hennesey sips
Micheal Jacksons dead now so you'll never lose your virginity bitch!!

*Who's MJ line was better? Let me continue*

This kids garbage..Im already bored..I'ma rich artist
Yea I got over'head..About twenty minutes after your bitch started!!
In this tourney Im god eating..you aint hard weakling..
Get on my level..I'll play Super Mario and give you the star treatment!!
You're crap, you're weak, this lines bad but your writing is worst..
I'll say it simple and plain..But I'd get DQ'd for biting your verse
You're dope!!!Nah thats far from true...12 lines ain't hard to do
Except for the voters...For real who even wants to read 6 bars from you?!?!
This guy thinks he's a lyrical Adonis, but yet we all know better
And the only Adonis he'll be seein...Is the loss I Adonis record!!



Look up the word Adonis for those who don't know...Let's get some votes now please.

[-MenaCe-]

Punches-Teflon(Barely)
Multi's-M.O.E
NamePlay-Neither
Creativity-M.O.E
Personals-Teflon
Constintancy-Teflon
Flow-Tie

Ok First off Tef's MJ line was better(LOL)and this battle was kinda neck and neck actually i had to go over this a couple times but in the end it was.....

V/Teflon

[K KiLLaH]

personals//nameplay-MOE
punches-Teflon
flow-Teflon
multis-MOE
wordplay-tie
consistency teflon

vote:teflon

*tef ur the only nigga i know who can win a battle with out throwing one personal crazy one liners kid and this battle was pretty neck n neck gj MOE*

[Teflon]

lol but i wasn't winning til lately, I know I really gotta start throwing them I would almost be unstoppable if good hahahah j/p...But 2-0 up.

[LunGzZ]

Teflon stop rappin… you lack-n-skill, most of your verses are packed-n-filled…*
I’ll be the reason da “kids lost in development,” like the morning after-pill//**
[Wtf....Thats a dope opener man, I'm jealous I haven't thought of the punch for that one. Setup was meh but punch was sick bro...8/10]
Be a huslta and run after-mills, but its hard when you can’t sell-a-gram…
I could promote you to messenger, and you still couldn’t Tellagram//(Tell-a-gram)***
[sorry bro, nice that your trying to find new wordplays, because it's hard to find them shits these days, but it's a little forced, and even a little forced is bad in the w/p game...6/10]
Ya never feel money man, cuz I LEFT-NO-green, it aint my fault you’ve never FELT-ON-weed…****
Did you notice, I used ya name in da last two multis, id figure I tell ya to help-da-read//
[sorry, I see your point here, but it never connects for me...5.5/10]
Now can’t ya see, a ghost rida is sumthin ya need, you might start winnin if you start suckin-cee…*****
Don’t say ya gonna kill b, you won’t step up you aint a fuckin-g, in da chat box the other night you kept duckin-me//******
[Lol...Okay a decent personal...Nothing huge, and the multies were a bit off. 6.5/10]
Dis cake ya see, cuz ima ungrateful fuck, an uncaring punk, when I start beatin-the-dead…
Im thinking of robbin him while im layn in bed, cuz only then will “THE GAME” put heat-to-his-head//*******
[Why do you put explanations and then after putting them you say "if you dont get this one kill yaself" lmao if you think they should get it dont explain it. I know its hard to stop the explanations, but it makes you look more serious. I'm not bragging, but I started by always explaining my bars, but when I started getting more respect, I decided to stop it, because I was around other high level battlers that got almost everything, and man enough to actually PM, or ask in the thread what they needed to know before voting. And I know your going to feel weird and thinking, what if they dont get it? I think that all the time, I try to make it simple and to the point, but either way if they dont get it, they should ask you for help understanding, or stop voting on the battle because it is unfair to both battlers. Loose Yourself wouldn't be a dope song if after every verse Shady cut the music and explained every line. It's up to the reader to have the knowledge and understand it. But in the end I think that your play on his avatar wasn't up to par...6/10]
I’ll kill ya like MJ, ya know have ya “holdin ya chest” like ya sayn-the-pledge…********
Ya hit da peek of ya fame, now this rappas fallin off n I just left him facen-da-ledge//
[If he's facing the ledge he hasn't fallen off. But on another note, the flow and multies were a little off and the punch wasn't as hard as you wanted it to be. You have some nice concepts throughout your verse, and it looks like with some help you could be a very good battler, if need be I would be happy to give you some pointers and help carve out some of the bad habits you have to help you get better...5.5/10]



TOTAL::: Like I said, you have some good ideas, Personals are great but you cant just turn any little thing into a personal, which is why when you look at vets, and they only have one or two personals in a bar, its because its hard to find a personal that is actually suffient enough to be a punch. Think about it for a second. You wouldn't use any old piece of information and try to make it look bigger then it already is. If you wouldn't care about it being said about you, chances are, neither will your opponent or the audience your suppose to be pleasing. You have talent, you just need to dig deeper fam. That opener was nice though...37.5/60



First off...
NO chick would fuck you, no matter how many hennesey sips
Micheal Jacksons dead now so you'll never lose your virginity bitch!!
[lol, okay punchline...Nothing hard hitting, a little funny though...6/10]
*Who's MJ line was better? Let me continue*

This kids garbage..Im already bored..I'ma rich artist
Yea I got over'head..About twenty minutes after your bitch started!!
[lol...Again, nothing special, some chuckles for your troubles though...6/10]
In this tourney Im god eating..you aint hard weakling..
Get on my level..I'll play Super Mario and give you the star treatment!!
[Just self hype here really, and what tourney is this, i thought it was a league? Cool metaphor though...6.5/10]
You're crap, you're weak, this lines bad but your writing is worst..
I'll say it simple and plain..But I'd get DQ'd for biting your verse
[LMAO....Okay thats a funny like now. Even though your grammar was off in the setup and kinda killed it for me, but the punch pulled everything together...7.5/10]
You're dope!!!Nah thats far from true...12 lines ain't hard to do
Except for the voters...For real who even wants to read 6 bars from you?!?!
[Lol...Again funny but not really that hard hitting...6.5/10]
This guy thinks he's a lyrical Adonis, but yet we all know better
And the only Adonis he'll be seein...Is the loss I Adonis record!!
[I love when I get bars I actually know Adonis, as I drew a pretty dope version of him in Art History. Punch wasn't that hard though brother...6.5/10]


TOTAL:::You have some good punchlines but remember, there are punchlines and Punches. Back on an old site of mine, where the structure of battling was very stretched, the punchlines your using now would be setups for the hard punches. Of course don't get offended at all, you have good ideas, just remember funny punchlines can't get you out of every situation...39/60




VoTe>>>>> Alright so this battle was pretty close, but as everyone else seem to thought, Teflon got the W for me. BUT I thought this battle was much closer then it looked. Teflon got the win because of consistency, and that alone. Instead of having bad bars and good bars he had an assortment of decent bars. On the other hand, MOE's verse definetly had the best bar of the battle, but then his inconsistency was his down fall. Both have some learning to do but I can see both of you having bright futures in battling. Tef gets my vote.

[Teflon]

Thanks for all the votes, 3-0 in the league...3-0 ko good battle homie you came nice.

[Dead Silence]

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