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INTERNET MAN PT. 1

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LOL THIS IS TEH R0XX0RZ AND IF EWE DONT GET THIS U FAIL AT TEH INTERWEBZ.

He Was an Average-Man, But Always Living From His Daddy's-Hand.
in His Basement, Surrounded By Washing And Drying Granny-Pants.
He Wielded His Mouse, And Set Out To Battle-it-With..
Guys Who Were Just Like He, But Now This Man-is-a-Myth.
He Started Off an Average internetter, With No Job And No Friends.
Fat as a Motherfucker, He'd Been Sitting Online Since He Was Ten.
After Years Of Experience, Mastering The Art Of internet.
He Made a Vow, To Kill All N00bz, And Sentence Lurkers To Death.
Failure Was Not an Option, He Was The Leet-Of-The-Leet.
His Life Was Now Dedicated, His Chair Sucked Him in, Like The Seat-Was-a-Leech.
Armed With His Wits, Links, Torrents, Noodz And Warez That He'd Gathered.
He Christened Himself as 'INTERNET MAN'; THE ONLINE GRANDFATHER!!!


Yeah... i Wasnt Tryin Lol i Wrote it in 5 Mins, Ask Plex.




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Post by Street Pharmacist »

lol pretty funny story..i liked how u ended it
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Post by 8th »

its was pretty good. reminded me of the south park war of the warcraft episode.

After Years Of Experience, Mastering The Art Of internet.
He Made a Vow, To Kill All N00bz, And Sentence Lurkers To Death.

^ha.

The lyrics themselves where decent. You had a good amount of multis and the flow was on point. Obviously could have been better, but you said yourself you didnt spend much time on it. and jeah, stay up.
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Post by RH1NO »

what a weirdo haha

this was good

i liked it cuz it was different

straight from the mind of domino

He Was an Average-Man, But Always Living From His Daddy's-Hand.
in His Basement, Surrounded By Washing And Drying Granny-Pants.

^^we all been there lol

good shit like readin your off the wall stuff..always interesting
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Thanks For The Feed Guys, ill Return The Favour.
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Post by Cee4 »

nice verse domino. it was original and entertaining. 8.5/10
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Post by Dead Silence »

haha nice dome

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His Life Was Now Dedicated, His Chair Sucked Him in, Like The Seat-Was-a-Leech.

that was good

overall 7/10
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Post by Dead Silence »

WE WANT PT 2!!!!! LOL
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Post by B-Bear »

It had to come from a Brit.. lol

And u made me laugh!! Props 2 u, the Internet Man!



I don't really see any reason for analyzing this piece, cause all it was meant to be was funny.. some good multies tho, gon read the rest of your scriptures now.. since u've gon all bananas on your pen lately.. keep it uuuup
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