Bitches may or may not feel-`mah-`flow
jus coz they vets they think they can try and steal-`my-`show .//.
im asian so they call me the ching chong china-`man
wheres the chivalry when u shootin me down when im tryna-`stand .//.
tryna break-`me-`down, like blood hounds they tryna hunt-`me-down
they call me River, aka lake-`its u ill-`drown they still lookin for something when i aint make no sound .//.
damit fuckin domino get off my-`ass see,
your always so fucking high so just fly-`past me .//.
i squashed beefs with hazard and cee4
but why does domino keep comin up like he plastered-`to my-`door .//.
shit bitch ive been tryna be patient turnin-`the other-`cheek
your more fuckin annoying then a retarded bird, quit flappin-ya-`beak .//.
you changed my title to sum ting wong-`wit-`me
im here for the long run, im channelin-`positive lyrical-`chi .//.
what makes it right ta racially slur asians, whose stereotypes are more played then pac-`man
but its obviously a crime punishable by death to racially slur a black-`man .//.
yeh yeh ill probably get even more hate for this-`verse
ha, maybe my shit is KURSED but if theres one thing this bitch-`has-`learned
its that EVERYBODY gets their TURN
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yeah if this was aHALF SAD HALF ' diss ' to domino hazard cee4 then it was pretty weak, dont lie you cant feel sad and write a diss it just doesnt work. none of the less ill break it down again and tell you what was wrong about the drop .
Bitches may or may not feel-`mah-`flow
jus coz they vets they think they can try and steal-`my-`show .//.
your half getting multi's, witch is good .
im asian so they call me the ching chong china-`man
wheres the chivalry when u shootin me down when im tryna-`stand .//.
well no one really calls you the ' ching chong china man now do they, thats bending the truth a little bar was choopy, flow wasnt there witch is a big aspect
tryna break-`me-`down, like blood hounds they tryna hunt-`me-down
they call me River, aka lake-`its u ill-`drown they still lookin for something when i aint make no sound .//.
ok you tried to set it out like there was a multi coming, but from my eyes i sore none
damit fuckin domino get off my-`ass see,
your always so fucking high so just fly-`past me .//.
^ if that was wordplay you gotta practise .. but it's good to see you getting the basic concept of it
i squashed beefs with hazard and cee4
but why does domino keep comin up like he plastered-`to my-`door .//.
again. no multi
shit bitch ive been tryna be patient turnin-`the other-`cheek
your more fuckin annoying then a retarded bird, quit flappin-ya-`beak .//.
once again there was no multi. flapping-ya-beak and turning-the-other-cheek dont rhyme nor it makes sense.. how can u flap a beak? even if you are a bird
you changed my title to sum ting wong-`wit-`me
im here for the long run, im channelin-`positive lyrical-`chi .//.
just no.
what makes it right ta racially slur asians, whose stereotypes are more played then pac-`man
but its obviously a crime punishable by death to racially slur a black-`man .//.
^ you didnt really get ur concept BUT HEY THERES AN ACUTAL MULTI.
yeh yeh ill probably get even more hate for this-`verse
ha, maybe my shit is KURSED but if theres one thing this bitch-`has-`learned
lol .
overall this was a poor drop for your standards stay up.. fuck the haters on the real though.
you just do what u do everyone started out like this . there's nothing wrong with it ethier keep writting and keep elevating
Bitches may or may not feel-`mah-`flow
jus coz they vets they think they can try and steal-`my-`show .//.
your half getting multi's, witch is good .
im asian so they call me the ching chong china-`man
wheres the chivalry when u shootin me down when im tryna-`stand .//.
well no one really calls you the ' ching chong china man now do they, thats bending the truth a little bar was choopy, flow wasnt there witch is a big aspect
tryna break-`me-`down, like blood hounds they tryna hunt-`me-down
they call me River, aka lake-`its u ill-`drown they still lookin for something when i aint make no sound .//.
ok you tried to set it out like there was a multi coming, but from my eyes i sore none
damit fuckin domino get off my-`ass see,
your always so fucking high so just fly-`past me .//.
^ if that was wordplay you gotta practise .. but it's good to see you getting the basic concept of it
i squashed beefs with hazard and cee4
but why does domino keep comin up like he plastered-`to my-`door .//.
again. no multi
shit bitch ive been tryna be patient turnin-`the other-`cheek
your more fuckin annoying then a retarded bird, quit flappin-ya-`beak .//.
once again there was no multi. flapping-ya-beak and turning-the-other-cheek dont rhyme nor it makes sense.. how can u flap a beak? even if you are a bird
you changed my title to sum ting wong-`wit-`me
im here for the long run, im channelin-`positive lyrical-`chi .//.
just no.
what makes it right ta racially slur asians, whose stereotypes are more played then pac-`man
but its obviously a crime punishable by death to racially slur a black-`man .//.
^ you didnt really get ur concept BUT HEY THERES AN ACUTAL MULTI.
yeh yeh ill probably get even more hate for this-`verse
ha, maybe my shit is KURSED but if theres one thing this bitch-`has-`learned
lol .
overall this was a poor drop for your standards stay up.. fuck the haters on the real though.
you just do what u do everyone started out like this . there's nothing wrong with it ethier keep writting and keep elevating


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dickhead^ i was gonna break it down..newayz do as he said,he pretty much broke it down decentlySequencE wrote:yeah if this was aHALF SAD HALF ' diss ' to domino hazard cee4 then it was pretty weak, dont lie you cant feel sad and write a diss it just doesnt work. none of the less ill break it down again and tell you what was wrong about the drop .
Bitches may or may not feel-`mah-`flow
jus coz they vets they think they can try and steal-`my-`show .//.
your half getting multi's, witch is good .
im asian so they call me the ching chong china-`man
wheres the chivalry when u shootin me down when im tryna-`stand .//.
well no one really calls you the ' ching chong china man now do they, thats bending the truth a little bar was choopy, flow wasnt there witch is a big aspect
tryna break-`me-`down, like blood hounds they tryna hunt-`me-down
they call me River, aka lake-`its u ill-`drown they still lookin for something when i aint make no sound .//.
ok you tried to set it out like there was a multi coming, but from my eyes i sore none
damit fuckin domino get off my-`ass see,
your always so fucking high so just fly-`past me .//.
^ if that was wordplay you gotta practise .. but it's good to see you getting the basic concept of it
i squashed beefs with hazard and cee4
but why does domino keep comin up like he plastered-`to my-`door .//.
again. no multi
shit bitch ive been tryna be patient turnin-`the other-`cheek
your more fuckin annoying then a retarded bird, quit flappin-ya-`beak .//.
once again there was no multi. flapping-ya-beak and turning-the-other-cheek dont rhyme nor it makes sense.. how can u flap a beak? even if you are a bird
you changed my title to sum ting wong-`wit-`me
im here for the long run, im channelin-`positive lyrical-`chi .//.
just no.
what makes it right ta racially slur asians, whose stereotypes are more played then pac-`man
but its obviously a crime punishable by death to racially slur a black-`man .//.
^ you didnt really get ur concept BUT HEY THERES AN ACUTAL MULTI.
yeh yeh ill probably get even more hate for this-`verse
ha, maybe my shit is KURSED but if theres one thing this bitch-`has-`learned
lol .
overall this was a poor drop for your standards stay up.. fuck the haters on the real though.
you just do what u do everyone started out like this . there's nothing wrong with it ethier keep writting and keep elevating
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