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Glamtrash
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Post by Glamtrash »

This shits strait. I had to go back and read shit from earlier to have something to compare it to, and this was the best of all of them, imo.

My fav. lines have already been quoted.

Keep it up.
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Gutta
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Post by Gutta »

this aint anywhere near my best but thanks for the feed


uppin mas por favor
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


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Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
-Cormega-Verbal Graffiti
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Post by M.O.B »

i didnt really dig this shit uwere mad choppy
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