Push It ...First Verse

[Onediversekid]

Here's a little somethign i'm working on....the quality is shit..becuz my mic is lol there's still lots to be done..but tell me what u think of it so far ..

[drunken jesus]

don't like the hook

verse flow was alright, could switch it up a little bit though so its not so montone, try to rap with a little more charisma, towards the end of your bars you get quieter, beat doesn't mesh well with your voice really

i wouldn't ad any effects when you're recording on a shitty mic, that echo or reverb you put on it makes your voice sound robotic could just be your mic i dunno

[Onediversekid]

lol thanks for theinfo..i will fix all of that shit ...write a new chorus ...thnks