My first drop

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:04 pm

http://illestlyrics.com/board/post20326.html#20326
http://illestlyrics.com/board/these-vessels-vt3290.html
http://illestlyrics.com/board/post20330.html#20330
http://illestlyrics.com/board/post20331.html#20331

Im sick of the hatin`, and the beef y'all creatin'/ Mother Fuckers... I'm done procrastinatin', Its time for you to be disinigrating
Im here ta clear my name, and murder this trash you call "game"/ That I believe is hella lame, My lord - what a fucken shameâ€¦
That it had to come to this, bottom line drawn you wont exsist/ after im done with this diss, all you'll have left is to reminisce
Bout the days before I killed you, back when you made your debut/ but now your writings through, and this shit was long overdue
I just put a slash in your heart, and ripped your soul a-fucken-part/ and if you hadda been smart, you woulda never beefed with me from tha start
Ill wrap this up with some advice, my words are as cold as fucken ice/ they wont leave you thinking twice, that everything I just said was precise

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:07 pm

that was a tight drop ms Blitz... keep that shit comin girl!!! flat out... peace!!!!

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:07 pm

You Need To Put a Link That u Lef Feed Back On
N Post it Before Your Verse Jus So Feed Back Gets Around Fa Everyone N U Get More

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:09 pm

Yea it Was Nice .... U Got Potential

Lines Dat Stuck Out : I just put a slash in your heart, and ripped your soul a-fucken-part/ and if you hadda been smart, you woulda never beefed with me from tha start

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:16 pm

lol thanks it was my first attempt at rapping

I also edited the post and added some links where i gave feed back - my bad on that i totally wasnt thinking when i posted this

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:17 pm

no worries honestly... u could have done in the future... after u posted ur drop... its no biggie really

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Sun Jan 28, 2007 7:44 pm

Damn , I Hope She Don't Call Me Out. lol Good Shit

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 4:12 am

Im here ta clear my name, and murder this trash you call "game"/ That I believe is hella lame, My lord - what a fucken shameâ€¦
That it had to come to this, bottom line drawn you wont exsist/ after im done with this diss, all you'll have left is to reminisce

lovin that part..its simplistic yet good u no..nice stay droppin -1-

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 4:22 am

not bad... that is all.

LadieHazard · Post by **LadieHazard** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:36 am

Ya shit is popin ma Thas whassup u Do da damn Thang i enjoyed readin it u got skill Keep doin u cant wait to see more post

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:43 am

Thanks to everyone who left feedback - I really appreciate your points of view and what not.

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 6:22 am

keyword.. "what not" .. that was directed at me haha

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